Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and directly addresses the question, but it could be more natural and engaging by adding a bit more detail and using varied vocabulary. Try to avoid repeating simple phrases like 'like to chat' and instead express your feelings more vividly.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share my thoughts and emotions openly, which helps strengthen our bond.

提案: Your answer provides relevant content but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct prepositions and articles, and clarify your ideas with linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about the activities.

例: Usually, my friends and I talk about homework or lectures I missed. Additionally, we often discuss where to hang out so we can relax and create memorable experiences together.

提案: Your answer attempts to explain your preference but is unclear and incomplete. To improve, organize your ideas clearly, use linking words, and complete your sentences. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'on particular time' and 'because of rush and.'

例: I prefer chatting one-on-one because in a group, it can be challenging to express my thoughts clearly and understand others due to the fast pace of conversation.

提案: Your answer conveys your preference but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct sentence structures and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because online, it's harder to express feelings accurately. In person, we can use facial expressions and body language to convey our thoughts better.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains double negatives and awkward phrasing. To improve, avoid double negatives and use more natural expressions. Also, provide a brief reason with linking words to support your answer.

例: No, I don't argue with my friends because I believe it can harm our relationship and cause trust issues between us.

× With my friends, I usually chat about homework or lectures which I had missed, or sometime we discuss about where we should hang out for spending a loser time with each other to create memories.

✓ With my friends, I usually chat about homework or lectures which I had missed, or sometimes we discuss where we should hang out to spend a leisure time together to create memories.

The preposition 'about' after 'discuss' is incorrect because 'discuss' is a transitive verb and does not require a preposition. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Loser time' is a misspelling of 'leisure time'. Also, 'for spending' should be 'to spend' to correctly express purpose. 'With each other' can be simplified to 'together' for clarity.

× or sometime we discuss about where we should hang out for spending a loser time with each other to create memories.

✓ or sometimes we discuss where we should hang out to spend a leisure time together to create memories.

'Sometime' is incorrect here; the correct adverb to indicate frequency is 'sometimes'. Also, 'loser time' is a misspelling and should be 'leisure time' which means free time for enjoyment.

× I prefer to chat with a single individual on particular time because whenever we do chat with a group of individuals, it could create more difficulties to explain our thoughts and understand their thoughts which they have to explain us because of rush and.

✓ I prefer to chat with a single individual at a particular time because whenever we chat with a group of individuals, it can create more difficulties in explaining our thoughts and understanding theirs because of the rush.

The phrase 'on particular time' should be 'at a particular time' as 'at' is the correct preposition for specific times. 'Explain us' is incorrect; the correct form is 'explain to us'. The sentence was incomplete and awkward; it was corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to chat with a single individual on particular time because whenever we do chat with a group of individuals, it could create more difficulties to explain our thoughts and understand their thoughts which they have to explain us because of rush and.

✓ I prefer to chat with a single individual at a particular time because whenever we chat with a group of individuals, it can create more difficulties in explaining our thoughts and understanding theirs because of the rush.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'particular time'; 'at' is the correct preposition. Also, 'to explain our thoughts' should be 'in explaining our thoughts' to correctly express the difficulty. 'Explain us' should be 'explain to us' but was rephrased for clarity.

× In my preference I am more interested to communicate with someone face to face because on online we cannot express our feelings more openly in and in corrective way.

✓ I prefer to communicate with someone face to face because online we cannot express our feelings as openly and correctly.

The phrase 'In my preference' is awkward and unnecessary; 'I prefer' is clearer. 'On online' is incorrect; 'online' does not need a preposition. 'In and in corrective way' is incorrect; it should be 'as openly and correctly' to express manner.

× But in face to face communication we can express our thoughts by using some expressions which could help us.

✓ But in face-to-face communication, we can express our thoughts by using expressions that can help us.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. The phrase 'some expressions which could help us' is better as 'expressions that can help us' for clarity and correctness.

× No, I don't not argue with my friends because I feel that it could affect to our relationship and could create some trust issues in between individuals or in between us.

✓ No, I do not argue with my friends because I feel that it could affect our relationship and create some trust issues between individuals or between us.

The phrase 'don't not' is a double negation and incorrect; it should be 'do not'. The preposition 'affect to' is incorrect; 'affect' does not require 'to'. 'In between' should be 'between' as 'between' is the correct preposition for two entities.