Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tránh lỗi nhỏ như 'daily story' nên là 'daily stories' và 'having regular conversations allow' nên là 'allows'. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. For instance, we often share our daily stories and support each other, which strengthens our friendship. Moreover, having regular conversations allows us to stay connected.

提案: Bạn trả lời ngắn gọn và có nội dung, nhưng câu trả lời có thể được mở rộng thêm để phong phú hơn. Bạn nên dùng từ vựng chính xác hơn như 'work' thay vì 'works' và thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: We often share interesting stories about our daily life and work. By doing so, we can understand each other better even when we are apart.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'reported' thay vì 'prefer', 'closed' thay vì 'close', 'It always fun' thiếu động từ 'is', 'enjoy each other companies' nên là 'enjoy each other's company', 'more likely' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh. Bạn nên chú ý sửa các lỗi này và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

例: Honestly, I prefer chatting with a group of friends because we have been close for about 10 years. It is always fun to catch up with all of them at once, as we can share different stories and enjoy each other's company. I find group conversations more interesting than talking to just one person.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt và có nội dung rõ ràng. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý cách dùng từ như 'refer to communicate' nên là 'prefer to communicate'. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một vài từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Honestly, I prefer to communicate face-to-face because chatting in person helps us express our emotions more clearly and build stronger relationships. However, when we don't have time to meet, we often use social media as a convenient alternative to stay in touch.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi từ vựng nghiêm trọng như 'inharmonious' có nghĩa trái ngược với ý bạn muốn nói. Bạn nên dùng từ 'harmonious' để diễn tả mối quan hệ tốt đẹp. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được mở rộng thêm để phong phú hơn.

例: Fortunately, my friends and I usually agree on most things because we share similar opinions and values. As a result, we rarely argue with each other, which helps maintain a strong and harmonious friendship.

× Moreover, having regular conversations allow us to stay connected.

✓ Moreover, having regular conversations allows us to stay connected.

The subject 'having regular conversations' is singular, so the verb should be 'allows' to agree in number.

× We often share interesting stories about our daily life and works.

✓ We often share interesting stories about our daily life and work.

The word 'work' is uncountable when referring to tasks or job in general, so 'works' is incorrect here.

× Honestly, I reported that with a group of friends because we have been closed for about 10 years.

✓ Honestly, I prefer that with a group of friends because we have been close for about 10 years.

The verb 'reported' is incorrect in this context; 'prefer' fits the meaning. Also, 'closed' should be 'close' to describe a relationship.

× It always fun to catch up with all of them at once as we can share different stories and enjoy each other companies.

✓ It is always fun to catch up with all of them at once as we can share different stories and enjoy each other's company.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is'. 'Each other companies' should be 'each other's company' to show possession and correct noun form.

× I find group conversations more likely and interesting than talking to just one person.

✓ I find group conversations more lively and interesting than talking to just one person.

The word 'likely' is incorrect here; 'lively' better describes the nature of group conversations.

× Honestly, I refer to communicate face to face because chatting in person helps us express our emotions more clearly and build stronger relationships.

✓ Honestly, I prefer to communicate face to face because chatting in person helps us express our emotions more clearly and build stronger relationships.

The verb 'refer to' is incorrect here; 'prefer to' is the correct expression to indicate choice.

× Fortunately, my friends and I usually agree on most things because we share similar opinions and values. As a result, we rarely argue with each other, which helps maintain a strong inharmonious friendship.

✓ Fortunately, my friends and I usually agree on most things because we share similar opinions and values. As a result, we rarely argue with each other, which helps maintain a strong harmonious friendship.

The word 'inharmonious' means lacking harmony, which contradicts the intended meaning. The correct adjective is 'harmonious'.