Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding informal phrases like 'spill some tea off some people' which may not be clear to all listeners. Also, organise your ideas logically and use linking words to connect your points smoothly.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I can share my secrets and discuss my problems with them. Moreover, it helps me feel supported and understood.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and try to complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details to make your answer more effective.

例: I usually chat with my friends about school and sometimes about family problems. They often give me positive advice, which helps me feel better.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to form complete sentences and avoid hesitations. Clearly state your preference and explain your reasons using linking words.

例: It depends on my mood. If I have personal problems, I prefer to chat with one friend privately. However, if I want to have a fun conversation, I enjoy chatting with a group.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Avoid filler words and try to express your ideas clearly and coherently. Use linking words to explain your preference with specific reasons.

例: To be honest, I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me to express my opinions freely. However, I understand that face-to-face communication is more personal.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases unnecessarily.

例: Sometimes I argue with my friends, but we usually resolve our problems within an hour. Although disagreements happen, we always find a solution together.

× Then spill some tea off some people sometimes.

✓ Then spill some tea about some people sometimes.

The phrase 'spill some tea off some people' is incorrect because the preposition 'off' is not used with 'spill tea'. The correct preposition is 'about' to indicate the topic of gossip. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× And they usually umm. Positively.

✓ And they usually respond positively.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb, making it a sentence structure error (ID 26). Adding 'respond' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence.

× It depends on my mood because, uh, if I. Person about maybe some problems, Of course I will. Chat with him personally and if I want to talk with.

✓ It depends on my mood because, uh, if I want to talk about some problems, of course I will chat with him personally, and if I want to talk with others, I will do so accordingly.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete, lacking verbs and proper sentence flow, which is a sentence structure error (ID 26). The correction completes the thoughts and connects the ideas properly.

× To be honest, I really enjoy going. With our social media because umm, I can express my own opinion on some topic and. Provide so I don't really like face to face communication.

✓ To be honest, I really enjoy using social media because, umm, I can express my own opinion on some topics and provide support, so I don't really like face-to-face communication.

The phrase 'going with our social media' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'using' for social media. Also, 'on some topic' should be plural 'on some topics'. 'Provide so' is unclear and corrected to 'provide support'. This involves incorrect prepositions and sentence structure errors (IDs 11 and 26).

× Sometimes yes, I can argue with my friends, but we are solving our problems just in an hour so. I'll say that we can argue, but we can. Find the solution.

✓ Sometimes yes, I can argue with my friends, but we usually solve our problems within an hour. So, I'll say that we can argue, but we can find a solution.

The phrase 'we are solving our problems just in an hour' is awkward and incorrect tense usage. The present simple 'we usually solve' is more appropriate for habitual actions. Also, 'find the solution' is better as 'find a solution'. This is a past tense and sentence structure issue (IDs 5 and 26).