Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте повторов и ошибок в использовании времен и артиклей. Например, используйте 'I really enjoy chatting' вместо 'I really enjoyed chatting', и 'these apps are convenient' вместо 'this apps are convenient'.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and gives me pleasure. We usually chat on WhatsApp and Instagram because these apps are convenient and easy to use.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки и неясности, например, 'about you' неуместно. Следует использовать связующие слова для логичности и избегать грамматических ошибок, таких как 'these conversations makes'.

例: We usually chat about our university major subjects and sometimes about our relationships, which makes our conversations meaningful.

提案: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и добавить немного деталей. Используйте связующие слова, чтобы сделать ответ более плавным.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than a group because it feels more comfortable and personal for me.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки, например, 'starting communicate' должно быть 'start communicating'. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для плавности.

例: I prefer to communicate via social media because I'm an introverted person, but in the future, I want to improve my social skills and start communicating face to face.

提案: Ответ можно сделать более естественным и грамматически правильным. Следует избегать тавтологии и использовать более точные выражения.

例: No, very rarely. Since we communicate through social media, we usually avoid topics that might cause disagreements.

× We usually chatting with my friends on the WhatsApp and Instagram because this apps are convenient and easy easy to use.

✓ We usually chat with my friends on WhatsApp and Instagram because these apps are convenient and easy to use.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used after 'usually'. The correct form is the base verb 'chat' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'this apps' should be 'these apps' to match plural noun 'apps'.

× this apps are convenient and easy easy to use.

✓ these apps are convenient and easy to use.

The demonstrative pronoun 'this' is singular but refers to plural noun 'apps'. It should be 'these' to agree in number with 'apps'.

× We usually chat with my friends about you, our university major subject.

✓ We usually chat with my friends about our university major subject.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used when referring to the topic of conversation. It should be 'our' to indicate possession and relevance to the speaker and friends.

× these conversations makes.

✓ these conversations make.

The subject 'conversations' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes' to agree in number.

× This makes our conversations meaningful.

✓ This makes our conversations meaningful.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend instead of group of people because it makes me more comfortable and personal.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend instead of a group of people because it makes me more comfortable and personal.

The phrase 'group of people' requires an article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× but in the future I want to improve my social skills and starting communicate face to face.

✓ but in the future I want to improve my social skills and start communicating face to face.

After 'want to', the base form of the verb 'start' should be used, followed by the gerund 'communicating' to indicate the action.

× No, very rarely, because we communicate via social media so we don't have topics that we can disagree with them.

✓ No, very rarely, because we communicate via social media so we don't have topics that we can disagree on.

The pronoun 'them' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'disagree on topics' without 'them'.