Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating 'chat with friends' multiple times.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially those from other countries, because it allows me to learn about their cultures and share mine as well.

提案: Your answer is brief and lacks specific details. Avoid using vague phrases like 'and etcetera.' Instead, provide more specific examples and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: My friends and I usually talk about our future plans, school experiences, and share funny stories to lighten the mood.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and informal expressions. Use complete sentences and linking words to improve clarity and flow. Also, explain your preference with more detail.

例: It depends, but I prefer talking with only one friend because it allows for uninterrupted, deeper conversations, which suits my introverted personality.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using complete sentences and clearer linking words. Also, explain what you mean by 'social battery' for clarity.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it conveys emotions more effectively. However, when I feel socially tired, I use social media to stay connected.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear vocabulary ('some teas'). Make sure to use correct grammar and clarify your points with specific reasons or examples.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, usually about school-related issues or misunderstandings.

× I prefer talk with only one friend because no one is interrupting you and we can talk about everything.

✓ I prefer to talk with only one friend because no one is interrupting you and we can talk about everything.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by the infinitive form 'to talk' rather than the bare verb 'talk'. Using 'prefer talk' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prefer to talk'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because a real conversation full of emotions and feelings.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because a real conversation is full of emotions and feelings.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to link the subject 'a real conversation' with the complement 'full of emotions and feelings'. The correct structure requires the verb 'is' to form a complete sentence.

× It's usually happens because of school and some teas.

✓ It usually happens because of school and some teas.

The auxiliary 'is' is incorrectly used with 'happens' in the present simple tense. The correct form is 'It usually happens' without 'is' because 'happens' already indicates present simple tense.