Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like chatting with friends?
受験者
Yes, I of course like chatting with my friends cause like when we chat we speak a lot of topics like what are we gonna wear? What are we gonna do on the weekends and we gossip and we FaceTime and I love it.
試験官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
受験者
We gossip and sometimes we talk about like our future, which university are we gonna study in? Which, uh, like, uh, country or which city? Like we talk about that and we talk about like the school. We talk about the gossips, yeah.
試験官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
受験者
I prefer to chat with an only friend 'cause we have much more fun and we got special topics that like nobody can hear.
試験官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
受験者
I I probably would like to have a face to face conversation because I want to see people's face and their like mimics and gestures, uh, when I speak.
試験官
Do you argue with friends?
受験者
I actually often argue with my friends in some topics like I don't know, I'm gonna quit.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
スコア: 65.0提案: Cevabınız doğal ancak biraz dağınık ve tekrarlar içeriyor. Daha kısa ve net cümleler kullanarak, gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalısınız. Ayrıca, bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlenizi daha akıcı yapabilirsiniz.
例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we discuss various topics, such as our weekend plans and fashion. We also gossip and often use FaceTime, which makes our conversations more lively.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
スコア: 60.0提案: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dolaylı ifadeler var. Daha spesifik ve doğrudan ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümleler arasında bağlaçlar kullanarak akıcılığı artırabilirsiniz.
例: Usually, we gossip and discuss our future plans, such as which university or city we want to study in. We also talk about school-related topics.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
スコア: 70.0提案: Cevabınız açık ancak daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz. "Only friend" yerine "one friend" demek daha doğru olur. Ayrıca, nedenleri daha net açıklayabilirsiniz.
例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it's more fun and we can discuss private topics that others can't hear.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
スコア: 75.0提案: Cevabınız anlaşılır ancak tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeler var. Daha akıcı ve doğal cümleler kurmalısınız. "Mimics" yerine "facial expressions" demek daha uygun olur.
例: I prefer face-to-face conversations because I can see people's facial expressions and gestures, which helps me understand them better.
Do you argue with friends?
スコア: 50.0提案: Cevabınız eksik ve belirsiz. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlamalı ve nedenlerini açıklamalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi tamamlamalısınız.
例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about different topics, but we usually resolve our disagreements quickly.
文法
× I prefer to chat with an only friend 'cause we have much more fun and we got special topics that like nobody can hear.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because we have much more fun and we have special topics that nobody else can hear.
The phrase 'an only friend' is incorrect; 'only' is an adjective and should modify 'one friend' without an article 'an'. Also, 'got' is informal past tense; 'have' fits better here. 'Like' is unnecessary and 'nobody else' clarifies exclusivity.
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