Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不够自然，语法错误较多，且内容不够连贯。建议练习使用简单且正确的句子表达自己的感受，避免重复和无意义的词汇。

例: I don't really like chatting with friends because I often feel embarrassed and nervous. Sometimes, I find it hard to express myself clearly.

提案: 回答中有语法和词汇错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，具体描述聊天内容，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives. We often share funny memes or videos, like a cute kitty video that made us laugh a lot.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达自己的偏好，并解释原因，避免使用不恰当的词汇。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am shy. Talking in a group is challenging for me since I find it hard to express my feelings clearly.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法和词汇错误。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复和口语填充词，增强语言的流畅性。

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me to think before replying. In face-to-face conversations, I have to respond quickly, which makes me nervous.

提案: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议用简单句子表达观点，说明争论的原因和过程，避免重复和错误用词。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions. We try to find out who is right by discussing the facts.

× I was feel embarrassed and I'm always nervous when I talk.

✓ I felt embarrassed and I'm always nervous when I talk.

这里的动词时态错误，'was feel'是不正确的过去时表达，应该用过去式'felt'。动词feel的过去式是felt，表示过去的感觉。

× I will have a lot of sweet and I will stand and just climb and I don't know how to say.

✓ I will have a lot of sweat and I will stand and just climb and I don't know how to say.

这里'sweet'应为'sweat'，但句子整体表达不清，可能是发音或拼写错误。'sweat'是不可数名词，表示汗水。

× I most mostly to chat with my friends about our daily life and I always like to share some short feel with funny or some meme and we will feel all the thing we are interested in.

✓ I mostly chat with my friends about our daily life and I always like to share some short feelings that are funny or some memes and we will share all the things we are interested in.

'most mostly'重复且错误，应该用'mostly'。'some short feel'应为'some short feelings'，feel是动词，需用名词形式。'all the thing'应为' all the things'，复数形式。

× For example the Kitty video that's really fun.

✓ For example, the Kitty video is really fun.

句子缺少谓语动词，'that's'应改为'is'，使句子完整。

× Absolutely for only one friend, you know, for people like me, I'm very shy and if I chat with a group, this is the biggest challenge for me because I am hard to uh, prevent my feeling in my statement and I will be be stuck in every World War can be spared.

✓ Absolutely, only with one friend. You know, for people like me, I'm very shy and if I chat with a group, it is the biggest challenge for me because I find it hard to control my feelings in my speech and I will be stuck in every word I want to say.

'for only one friend'应为'only with one friend'更自然。'I am hard to prevent my feeling'表达错误，应为'I find it hard to control my feelings'。'be be stuck'重复，应为'be stuck'。'every World War can be spared'应为'every word I want to say'。

× I would prefer the social media because when face to face you have to, uh, swiftly respond their answer.

✓ I would prefer social media because when face to face, you have to swiftly respond to their answers.

'prefer the social media'中'the'不需要，'prefer social media'更正确。'respond their answer'缺少介词'to'，应为'respond to their answers'。

× But if I use social media, I could uh, choose. I could sing twice and then send the more accurate message for the person I want to send with.

✓ But if I use social media, I can choose. I can think twice and then send a more accurate message to the person I want to send it to.

'could'改为'can'更符合现在时态。'sing twice'应为'think twice'。'send the more accurate message for the person I want to send with'表达不正确，应为'send a more accurate message to the person I want to send it to'。

× Yes, I always urge with my friend when we have different views in the in some evidence and we will find each other which one? Which one of us is more accurate and which one's more not accurate?

✓ Yes, I always argue with my friend when we have different views on some evidence and we try to find out which one of us is more accurate and which one is less accurate.

'urge with my friend'应为'argue with my friend'。'in the in some evidence'应为'on some evidence'。'find each other which one?'表达不清，应为'try to find out which one of us is more accurate'。'more not accurate'应为'less accurate'。