Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达需更准确，避免语法错误，如"an university students"应为"a university student"，"stress Buster"应为"stress buster"且不需大写。回答应更简洁自然，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because as a university student, I am often busy with assignments and dissertations. Talking with them helps me relieve stress and relax.

提案: 回答中有较多语气词"uh"，影响流畅度。内容应更具体，避免重复表达"share gossip"和"share our daily update"。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: My friends and I usually talk about our daily lives and sometimes share funny stories. For example, when we meet at a coffee shop, we enjoy chatting about amusing events that happened recently.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，如"that's will"应为"that will"。句子结尾不完整，缺少内容。建议回答完整且避免语气词，表达更自然。

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it helps me feel more relaxed. We can share funny stories or the latest news more comfortably.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如"is facial expressions"应为"their facial expressions"，"This help"应为"This helps"。避免重复使用"uh"，使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can observe my friends' facial expressions and body language. This helps me understand their feelings and respond more naturally.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误，如"to be candidate"应为"to be candid"，句子结尾不完整。建议使用完整句子，避免语法和拼写错误，表达更清晰。

例: To be candid, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions on daily issues or the latest news. However, I think these arguments are good opportunities to share ideas and understand each other better.

× You know, as an university students, I am always busy with my assignments or dissertation and communicating with my friends.

✓ You know, as a university student, I am always busy with my assignments or dissertation and communicating with my friends.

这里的主语是单数形式，应该使用单数名词student，而不是复数students。同时，冠词应为a而不是an，因为university的发音以辅音音素开头。

× Well, personally, I would like to chat with only one friend, you know, that's will, uh, help me feel relaxed, especially share something funny or share some latest news or gossip and.

✓ Well, personally, I would like to chat with only one friend, you know, that will, uh, help me feel relaxed, especially sharing something funny or sharing some latest news or gossip.

这里的that后面不应该有's，正确用法是that will。并且动词share后应使用动名词形式sharing以保持句子结构一致。

× Well, personally, I prefer to communicate face to face. You know, I can get immediate feedback by observing my friends, uh, is facial expressions or body language.

✓ Well, personally, I prefer to communicate face to face. You know, I can get immediate feedback by observing my friends' facial expressions or body language.

这里的is应为所有格形式friends'，表示“我朋友们的面部表情”，而不是is。

× Well, to be candidate, I will sometimes argue with my friends 'cause we may have some disagreements on our daily issue or latest news, but I think it will be a best chance for us to share ideas or.

✓ Well, to be candid, I will sometimes argue with my friends 'cause we may have some disagreements on our daily issues or latest news, but I think it will be the best chance for us to share ideas.

短语to be candidate应为to be candid，意为“坦白地说”。daily issue应为复数daily issues，因为通常有多个日常问题。a best chance应为the best chance，因为这里指特定的最佳机会。