Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding unnecessary words like 'do chatting' and filler sounds such as 'Uh'. Also, directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and add a supporting detail using linking words.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected. For example, I often use my phone to catch up with them during breaks.

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Use linking words to organize your ideas and be specific about the topics you discuss. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

例: We usually chat about our daily work and personal matters. For instance, I often ask about their family or how their studies and jobs are going.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Avoid filler words and ensure grammatical accuracy.

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because group chats can be chaotic. Moreover, when I'm busy or tired, I appreciate having some quiet time.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain your preference clearly. Avoid unfinished thoughts and provide specific reasons.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because physical presence helps build a stronger connection. Unlike video calls, it allows for better understanding through body language.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure and linking words. Be specific about why disagreements can be positive in friendships.

例: Yes, I believe arguing with friends is natural because it helps us understand each other better. Through disagreements, we learn to accept our differences and strengthen our friendship.

× I love to do chatting with my friends.

✓ I love chatting with my friends.

The verb 'love' is followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. 'Love to do chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'love chatting'. This is a common collocation in English.

× I just need a little time and my gadgets for them to connect with me.

✓ I just need a little time and my gadgets to connect with my friends.

The phrase 'for them to connect with me' is unclear and awkward. The intended meaning is that the gadgets are used to connect with friends. Using 'to connect with my friends' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× What happened on our daily, uh, work and sometimes personal things like what happened to their family members or how is it going in their study or work just so that that you chat is OK with us even though we don't.

✓ We usually chat about what happened in our daily work and sometimes personal things, like what happened to their family members or how their studies or work are going, just so that chatting is okay with us even though we don't always do it.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clear structure. It mixes topics and has unclear references. The correction organizes the ideas into a coherent sentence with proper subject-verb agreement and clearer meaning.

× I personally preferred to chat only one friend.

✓ I personally prefer to chat with only one friend.

The question is about usual preference, so present tense 'prefer' is appropriate. Also, 'chat only one friend' is missing the preposition 'with'. The corrected sentence uses present tense and correct preposition.

× I personally preferred to chat only one friend.

✓ I personally prefer to chat with only one friend.

The verb 'chat' requires the preposition 'with' when indicating the person you chat with. Omitting 'with' is incorrect.

× It is because it's uh. I find it chaotic when there's a group chat and sometimes I'm so busy and also want to sleep and have my time for myself.

✓ It is because I find it chaotic when there's a group chat, and sometimes I'm so busy that I also want to sleep and have time for myself.

The original sentence has an incomplete phrase 'it's uh.' and awkward conjunctions. The correction removes the incomplete phrase and connects ideas properly with conjunctions and clauses.

× Chatting with a group of people makes me feel exhausted.

✓ Chatting with a group of people makes me feel exhausted.

This sentence is correct and requires no change.

× Personally, I prefer talking face to face.

✓ Personally, I prefer talking face-to-face.

The phrase 'face-to-face' is a compound adjective and should be hyphenated when used as an adverbial phrase.

× It is because it's different when there's a physical presence and doing that it will definitely help your connection compared to just using the video call.

✓ It is because it's different when there's a physical presence, and doing that will definitely help your connection compared to just using a video call.

The phrase 'using the video call' is incorrect; it should be 'using a video call'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by removing unnecessary words and adding commas.

× It will just your.

✓ It will just be better.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'be better' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× Of course it's important that you also have differences even though you are already friends cause through that you learn from each other and the friendship is accepting was the your differences even though you have a flows you still wanted to.

✓ Of course, it's important that you also have differences even though you are already friends, because through that you learn from each other, and friendship is about accepting your differences even though you have flaws; you still want to maintain it.

The original sentence is fragmented, uses informal 'cause' instead of 'because', and has unclear phrases like 'accepting was the your differences' and 'have a flows you still wanted to'. The correction clarifies meaning, corrects conjunctions, and improves sentence structure.