Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends. We often talk about various topics like the latest trends, global news, and our personal lives. We care about each other and support one another.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并且更具体地描述聊天内容。

例: We usually chat about the latest trends, global news, and our personal experiences. I enjoy listening carefully to my friends' stories because it helps us communicate better.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构有些重复，且结尾不完整。建议完善句子，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I can focus better and listen carefully. This way, I can understand them well and offer useful advice.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议合并句子，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it gives me time to think before replying, and I can respond anytime and anywhere without any limitations.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，准确表达观点。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when I feel upset or annoyed. I think it's important to express my feelings honestly because it helps me feel better.

× Yes, definitely I love chat with my friends.

✓ Yes, definitely I love chatting with my friends.

动词love后面应接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。这里chat应改为chatting。

× We often chat a lot of different kind topics, such as trendy or such as trendy or news or global news or even our personal life.

✓ We often chat about a lot of different kinds of topics, such as trends, news, global news, or even our personal lives.

名词topics前应使用复数形式kinds，且搭配a lot of。trendy应改为trends表示趋势。personal life应为复数personal lives。

× We care, we are you know, we take care of each other or by.

✓ We care, you know, we take care of each other.

句中are you know不合适，应去掉are。or by无意义，应删除。

× We chat a lot of different topics such as latest trend, global news or even our personal lives.

✓ We chat about a lot of different topics such as the latest trends, global news, or even our personal lives.

latest trend应为复数the latest trends，表示最新的多个趋势。chat后应加介词about。

× We love to listen each listening to each other's stories or just listen carefully what people say and we think that is a good communication.

✓ We love listening to each other's stories or just carefully listening to what people say, and we think that is good communication.

listen后应接介词to。each listening不合适，应改为listening。carefully应放在listen前修饰动词。good communication前不加冠词。

× Well, I prefer chatting with one friend because I think I can focus on one person carefully in that situation and I can listen.

✓ Well, I prefer chatting with one friend because I think I can focus on one person carefully in that situation and I can listen.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× I can also listen to what they said and give them some advice that I.

✓ I can also listen to what they say and give them some advice.

此处描述习惯动作，应使用一般现在时say而非过去时said。句尾that I不完整，应删除。

× I would say I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me time.

✓ I would say I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me time.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× It allows me having time to think what I should reply and I can I can responding anytime, anywhere with no limitation.

✓ It allows me to have time to think about what I should reply, and I can respond anytime, anywhere with no limitation.

allows后应接不定式to have，而非动名词having。think后应加介词about。responding应改为动词原形respond。

× When I made something uh, unlucky or something mad, something irritate me, I definitely would argue with my friends and tell them how the truth that made me feel more comfortable after I telling them.

✓ When I did something unlucky or something made me mad or irritated me, I definitely would argue with my friends and tell them the truth that made me feel more comfortable after telling them.

made和irritate应使用过去式did和irritated。tell them后应接the truth。telling them前不加I。