Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點重複且語言不夠自然，建議減少填充詞如 'uh'，並且用更流暢的句子表達。可以嘗試用更具體的話題來豐富內容。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often discuss the latest celebrity news, popular K-pop groups like IOI and IZ*ONE, and trends among our classmates. Our conversations cover a wide range of topics.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤且表達不清楚，建議使用完整句子並避免重複。可以用連接詞使句子更連貫。

例: We usually talk about interesting things happening around us, such as gossip about classmates or popular trends in Taiwan and other Asian countries. Recently, we've been discussing the exchange student program.

提案: 回答有點冗長且語法不夠正確，建議簡潔表達並使用連接詞使句子流暢。可以更具體說明為何喜歡一對一聊天。

例: I like both, but I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper conversations about personal goals or important topics like university applications.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤且表達不夠清晰，建議使用正確句型並避免口語化的感嘆詞。可以清楚比較兩種溝通方式的優缺點。

例: I find communicating through social media very convenient, but I still prefer face-to-face communication because it makes me feel closer to my friends and family. It is more heartwarming and you can sense the atmosphere better.

提案: 回答中有語法錯誤且有填充詞，建議用更正式且流暢的句子表達。可以更具體說明如何處理意見不同。

例: I rarely argue with my friends because we respect each other's perspectives and opinions. Even when we have different views, we remain calm and respectful.

× Yes, I do like to check in with my friend.

✓ Yes, I do like to check in with my friends.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because the context implies chatting with multiple friends, not just one.

× We usually talk about some gossip uh around our classmates and uh some the Russian trend uh, the celebrity, our favorite K pop IO 17 something like that.

✓ We usually talk about some gossip around our classmates and some Russian trends, celebrities, our favorite K-pop groups like IOI and 17, something like that.

'Trend' should be plural 'trends' because multiple trends are discussed. Also, 'celebrity' should be plural 'celebrities' to match the plural context.

× We usually talk about the something interesting around us like gossip around our classmate popular trend in Taiwan there or other Asia Asia country.

✓ We usually talk about something interesting around us like gossip about our classmates, popular trends in Taiwan or other Asian countries.

'Classmate' should be plural 'classmates' and 'trend' should be plural 'trends' to match the plural context. 'Asia Asia country' is corrected to 'Asian countries' for proper plural and adjective form.

× But recently the we usually T talking about the exchange student program and.

✓ But recently, we have usually been talking about the exchange student program.

The sentence has incorrect verb form and structure. 'T talking' is incorrect; it should be 'have been talking' to express recent continuous action.

× Actually I do like both, but if you really want me to choose either one, I would prefer with only one friend since that may will have a deep deep conversation with my friend and something sometimes we can talk about like personal goals or the university application something important.

✓ Actually, I do like both, but if you really want me to choose either one, I would prefer with only one friend since that may allow a deep conversation with my friend and sometimes we can talk about personal goals or university applications, something important.

'May will have' is incorrect modal verb usage; 'may allow' is correct. 'University application' should be plural 'university applications' to match the context.

× since that may will have a deep deep conversation with my friend

✓ since that may allow a deep conversation with my friend

Using two modal verbs 'may will' together is incorrect. Only one modal verb should be used. 'May allow' is appropriate here.

× Oh Lord, communicate with people on social media that is quite convenient then face to face but still like the face to face communication since it will me feel closer to my friend or the family and it's more heart warming and you can feel the atmosphere.

✓ Oh Lord, communicating with people on social media is quite more convenient than face to face, but I still like face-to-face communication since it makes me feel closer to my friends or family. It's more heartwarming and you can feel the atmosphere.

Incorrect prepositions and sentence structure: 'communicate' should be 'communicating'; 'convenient then' should be 'more convenient than'; 'will me feel' should be 'makes me feel'; 'the family' should be 'family' without 'the'.

× it will me feel closer to my friend or the family

✓ it makes me feel closer to my friends or family

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the general context; 'the family' should be 'family' without 'the'.

× Actually I don't have a experience too large arguing with my friend since we all respect each other perspective and opinions that.

✓ Actually, I haven't had much experience arguing with my friends since we all respect each other's perspectives and opinions.

'Don't have a experience' is incorrect; correct form is 'haven't had much experience'. 'Too large' is incorrect quantifier; 'much' is appropriate. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends'. 'Each other perspective' should be 'each other's perspectives'.

× Actually I don't have a experience too large arguing with my friend since we all respect each other perspective and opinions that.

✓ Actually, I haven't had much experience arguing with my friends since we all respect each other's perspectives and opinions.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. 'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' because multiple viewpoints are implied.

× So even though we experience the different perspective, we still uh stay calm and be respectful to each other.

✓ So even though we experience different perspectives, we still stay calm and are respectful to each other.

'The different perspective' should be 'different perspectives' without 'the' and plural. 'Be respectful' should be 'are respectful' to match subject-verb agreement.