Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，例如“check”应为“chat”，并且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整的句子来表达你的意思。

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends and we often talk about the latest news or sports.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇“hobby, hobbies”，且句子结构简单。建议避免重复，使用连词使句子更连贯，并提供更具体的细节。

例: We usually talk about our hobbies, sports, and the TV shows we enjoy watching.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的动词形式和完整句子，并说明原因以丰富内容。

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I can have a deeper conversation with her.

提案: 回答中动词使用错误且表达不完整。建议明确表达偏好，并说明原因，使回答更自然和具体。

例: I prefer communicating via social media like WeChat because it's convenient and quick.

提案: 回答不够明确且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，并用连词连接句子，提供具体细节。

例: Sometimes we argue, but usually we play sports together outside and have fun.

× Yes, I like check with my friends and talk about umm. Updates or sports?

✓ Yes, I like checking with my friends and talking about umm, updates or sports.

动词like后面应接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。这里的check和talk应改为checking和talking。

× We usually talk about hobby, hobbies and sports and TV.

✓ We usually talk about hobbies, sports, and TV.

hobby和hobbies同时出现不合适，应使用复数hobbies表示多种爱好。

× I like check with only one's friends because. I like talk to her.

✓ I like checking with only one friend because I like talking to her.

like后应接动名词形式，check和talk应改为checking和talking。one's friends用法错误，应为one friend。

× I like check my friend at WeChat.

✓ I like checking my friend on WeChat.

like后应接动名词checking。介词用on WeChat更合适。

× Maybe, but we usually have sports and play with outside.

✓ Maybe, but we usually play sports and play outside.

have sports用法不当，应为play sports。play后不需要with，play outside表示在外面玩。