Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了喜欢与朋友聊天的原因，但语言表达不够自然，存在语法错误和重复表达。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更地道的表达方式。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us become closer and allows us to share our feelings and recent experiences.

提案: 回答内容较为具体，但句子结构较为简单且有语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并丰富词汇表达。

例: We usually talk about our recent work experiences and share interesting or fun things that have happened in our lives.

提案: 回答不够直接，表达不够清晰，有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，并用完整句子表达原因。

例: I prefer chatting with my best friend because I feel more comfortable sharing personal matters with just one close person.

提案: 回答表达了偏好，但语言不够自然，有语法和用词错误。建议简化表达，使用正确的短语和句型。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see others' reactions, which makes the conversation more comfortable.

提案: 回答内容明确，但句子结构和用词有待改进。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词，使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, sometimes we argue about social news because everyone has their own opinions on these topics.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends because this can make us more close and also talking to friends about your recent resolution will make friends to better understand your feelings and can make you more close.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because this can make us closer and also talking to friends about your recent resolution will help friends better understand your feelings and can make you closer.

“more close”是错误的比较级用法，正确的形式是“closer”。此外，“make friends to better understand”中“to”不应出现，应直接用动词原形“help friends better understand”。建议学习形容词比较级的正确用法和动词搭配。

× About our recent work life and the things happened in my work experience and also some interesting fun findings in my life.

✓ About our recent work life and the things that happened in my work experience and also some interesting fun findings in my life.

“the things happened”缺少关系代词“that”，导致句子结构不完整。应使用“the things that happened”来引导定语从句。建议注意定语从句的正确结构。

× Not really, I have a best friend so normally when things have that happened I would love to share with the best one first.

✓ Not really, I have a best friend so normally when things have happened I would love to share with the best one first.

“things have that happened”中“that”位置错误，应去掉“that”或放在“things”和“have”之间。这里正确用法是“things have happened”。建议注意副词和关系代词的位置。

× Yes, of course I would prefer to chat in face instead of the online chatting because you can feel the reactive from the others when you when chatting face to face and this can make you feel more comfortable.

✓ Yes, of course I would prefer to chat face to face instead of online chatting because you can feel the reaction from others when chatting face to face and this can make you feel more comfortable.

“chat in face”应为“chat face to face”，“the reactive”应为“the reaction”，“the others”应为“others”。介词和冠词使用错误影响表达准确性。建议学习固定搭配和冠词用法。

× Yes, sometimes we will argue when talking something like the society news because everyone has the their own opinion on the news.

✓ Yes, sometimes we will argue when talking about something like the social news because everyone has their own opinion on the news.

“talking something”应为“talking about something”，“the their own opinion”中“the”多余，应去掉。建议注意动词搭配和代词的正确使用。