Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや言い回しの不自然さが見られます。例えば、「it it decline my stress」は「it helps me reduce stress」などに修正し、より明確で自然な表現にしましょう。また、内容をもう少し具体的にして、なぜ友達と話すことが楽しいのか説明すると良いです。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me reduce stress. They often share interesting stories, which makes our conversations fun and engaging.

提案: 回答が不明瞭で文法的にも誤りがあります。まず、「crime school」は意味が不明瞭なので正しい単語を使いましょう。また、話題について具体的に説明し、なぜその話題を選ぶのか理由を加えると良いです。

例: I usually talk about my job because it takes up a lot of my time. For example, I work at a driving school, and sometimes I discuss challenges I face with my boss.

提案: 回答が途中で終わっており、内容が不十分です。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べましょう。例えば、グループで話すことの楽しさや利点を具体的に説明すると良いです。

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more lively and I can hear different opinions, which makes the conversation more interesting.

提案: 回答が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。なぜ対面でのコミュニケーションを好むのか、具体的な理由を述べましょう。また、文を完結にまとめることも重要です。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see the other person's facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand them better.

提案: 回答が途中で終わっており、文法的な誤りもあります。過去形の正しい使い方を学び、具体的なエピソードを簡潔に述べると良いです。

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends. For example, when I was a child, I had a fight with a friend because he said something that upset me.

× Yes, I really like to talk with my friends. Uh, it it decline my stress and it was so fun because my friend tell me a lot of things, which I.

✓ Yes, I really like to talk with my friends. Uh, it declines my stress and it is so fun because my friend tells me a lot of things, which I.

The verbs 'decline' and 'tell' need to be in the third person singular present tense to agree with the singular subject 'it' and 'my friend'. The correct forms are 'declines' and 'tells'. Also, 'it was so fun' should be 'it is so fun' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I often talk about my my. Job uh, I work at crime school and my boss, uh, my boss is a bad, I think.

✓ I often talk about my job. Uh, I work at a crime school and my boss, uh, my boss is bad, I think.

The repeated word 'my' is a mistake and should be removed. 'Job' is singular and correctly used. 'Crime school' needs an article 'a' before it. 'Is a bad' is incorrect; 'bad' is an adjective and does not need 'a' before it.

× I prefer to chat with a group because. I really enjoyed and.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group because I really enjoy it.

The original sentence is incomplete and fragmented. 'Because.' should not end with a period but connect to the next clause. 'Enjoyed' is past tense but the context suggests present tense 'enjoy'. The sentence needs to be completed properly.

× I like to chat face to face because, uh, I, I can see dear, I can see there, umm.

✓ I like to chat face to face because, uh, I can see them, I can see there, umm.

The word 'dear' is incorrect here; likely the student meant 'them' referring to friends. 'Face to face' is correct as a phrase. 'There' is ambiguous but kept as is since context is unclear.

× Uh, yes, sometimes. In fact, when I was a child, uh, younger than now, I, I fighted with my friend because he said to me, you.

✓ Uh, yes, sometimes. In fact, when I was a child, uh, younger than now, I fought with my friend because he said to me, you.

The verb 'fighted' is incorrect past tense form; the correct past tense of 'fight' is 'fought'. This is a common irregular verb error.