Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve clarity by using more precise vocabulary. Also, restructure your answer to be more concise and natural, for example, replace 'be realized' with 'feel understood'.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my close friends because it allows me to share my ideas, catch up on their lives, and recharge my energy.

提案: Reduce hesitation and filler words, and clarify your points. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be more specific about the topics you discuss.

例: I usually talk about recent events in my life, including both good and bad experiences, because I value friends who listen and offer advice.

提案: Avoid repetition and filler words. Make your answer clearer and more structured by stating your preference directly and explaining why, using linking words for coherence.

例: I prefer chatting with a small, private circle of close friends because it allows me to maintain my privacy and have more meaningful conversations.

提案: Work on sentence fluency and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the benefits of face-to-face communication.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me build stronger connections and improve my interpersonal skills across different cultures.

提案: Minimize filler words and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to explain your reasoning clearly and provide a concluding statement.

例: No, I avoid arguing with my friends because it can damage our relationship. Instead, I try to be patient and politely share my opinions to resolve disagreements.

× I can uh be realized

✓ I can uh be relieved

The phrase 'be realized' is incorrect here; the student likely meant 'be relieved' to express feeling comforted or relaxed. 'Realized' is the past participle of 'realize' and does not fit the intended meaning.

× I assure them my bad experiences

✓ I share with them my bad experiences

The verb 'assure' is incorrectly used here. The student likely intended to say 'share with them my bad experiences' because 'assure' means to promise or say something confidently, which does not fit the context of telling about experiences.

× that feels me more privacy

✓ that gives me more privacy

The phrase 'feels me more privacy' is incorrect. The verb 'feel' is not used transitively with a person as the object in this context. The correct verb is 'gives' to express that the circle of friends provides more privacy.

× that feels more private

✓ that feels more private

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× build a connection between people

✓ build a connection with people

The phrase 'build a connection between people' is not incorrect but 'build a connection with people' is more natural when referring to personal interaction. 'Between' is typically used when specifying two distinct entities.

× Not not only I can meet so many people but I so I can improve my skill of talking with people in any kind of cultures or even countries

✓ Not only can I meet so many people, but I can also improve my skill of talking with people from any kind of culture or even country

The original sentence has word order issues and pronoun misuse. The correct form for emphasis is 'Not only can I meet...' and 'I can also improve...'. Additionally, 'cultures' and 'countries' should be singular or preceded by 'any kind of' to be grammatically correct.