Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy chú ý đến việc sử dụng thì và số nhiều đúng cách.

例: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with my friends. Whenever I have free time, I like to share stories with them because I have many interesting experiences to tell.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our studies and daily lives, such as school activities and hobbies. Sometimes, we also discuss interesting or surprising stories.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để làm rõ ý. Ngoài ra, từ vựng nên phong phú hơn và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "funny" khi muốn nói "vui vẻ".

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it is more enjoyable and lively. Although it can be noisy sometimes, I find group conversations very entertaining.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và giải thích rõ lý do.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see my friends' emotions and expressions, which helps me understand them better.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng và không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu phủ định đúng cách và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về cách bạn xử lý mâu thuẫn.

例: No, I don't often argue with my friends because I usually listen to their opinions carefully, which helps me understand and resolve any problems.

× When I free I can chat with my friend all days because I have many stories I want to tell them.

✓ When I am free, I can chat with my friends all day because I have many stories I want to tell them.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' after 'I' to form the present tense 'I am free'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'them'. 'All days' should be 'all day' to express the idea of the whole day.

× When I free I can chat with my friend all days because I have many stories I want to tell them.

✓ When I am free, I can chat with my friends all day because I have many stories I want to tell them.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to agree with the pronoun 'them' which refers to multiple people.

× I usually chat with my friends about study or our daily lives such as school or hobbies, or sometime we usually talk about notorious stories.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about studying or our daily lives such as school or hobbies, or sometimes we usually talk about notorious stories.

The noun 'study' should be changed to the gerund 'studying' after the preposition 'about'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× I usually chat with my friends about study or our daily lives such as school or hobbies, or sometime we usually talk about notorious stories.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about studying or our daily lives such as school or hobbies, or sometimes we usually talk about notorious stories.

The word 'sometime' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'sometimes' to indicate occasional frequency.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I think more people more fun.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I think more people means more fun.

The sentence lacks the verb 'means' to connect the subject and complement. 'More people more fun' is incomplete and needs a verb.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because when I and my friend face to face I can see emotions the about of them.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when my friend and I are face to face, I can see their emotions.

The phrase 'when I and my friend face to face' is missing the verb 'are'. The pronoun order should be 'my friend and I'. 'The about of them' is incorrect; it should be 'their emotions'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because when I and my friend face to face I can see emotions the about of them.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when my friend and I are face to face, I can see their emotions.

The pronoun order should be 'my friend and I' as the subject. 'The about of them' is incorrect; the correct possessive pronoun is 'their'.

× No, I really argue with my friends because I usually listen the story or opinion so I can understand the the the problems and solve that.

✓ No, I rarely argue with my friends because I usually listen to their stories or opinions so I can understand the problems and solve them.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'. 'The story or opinion' should be plural 'stories or opinions' to match context. 'The the the' is a repetition error. 'Solve that' should be 'solve them' to refer to 'problems'.