Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and keep your sentences concise and relevant.

例: No, I don't like chatting very much because it takes a lot of time to write messages. I prefer calling because I can hear the other person's emotions and feelings through their voice, which is not possible in chatting.

提案: Improve clarity by organizing your ideas and using correct grammar. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific examples to enrich your response.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our work and daily activities. For example, we discuss what tasks we have started, what we plan to do next, and share updates about our studies or projects.

提案: Avoid filler words and repetition to make your answer more fluent. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details to support your preference.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it's more enjoyable. For instance, I have a group chat with my brothers and my mom where we share photos and videos of our kids and daily life, which makes the conversation lively and fun.

提案: Try to avoid repetition and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and provide specific examples to support your preference.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication rather than social media because looking into someone's eyes helps me understand their expressions and feelings better, which is important for effective communication.

提案: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to make your response coherent and specific.

例: Yes, I often argue with my close friends about various topics, including our personal lives and work-related cases. For example, as dentists, we discuss and sometimes disagree on how to handle certain cases.

× And no, I don't like too much.

✓ No, I don't like it too much.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'And no' and omits the object 'it' after 'like'. The modal verb 'do' is correctly used for negation, but the sentence needs 'it' to specify what is not liked. Also, 'too much' should be placed after the object for clarity.

× I think calling is better than chatting as it wastes a lot of time to write and I want to call and from the sound of your voice I can you your emotion, your feeling of everything, but in chatting I can't know.

✓ I think calling is better than chatting because chatting wastes a lot of time writing, and when I call, from the sound of your voice I can understand your emotions and feelings, but in chatting I can't.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear structure and missing words. 'It wastes a lot of time to write' is awkward; 'wastes a lot of time writing' is better. 'I want to call and from the sound of your voice I can you your emotion' is ungrammatical; it should be 'when I call, from the sound of your voice I can understand your emotions'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And I usually chat with my friends about something in our work, about our day, how how it gone.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about things related to our work, about our day, and how it has gone.

The phrase 'about something in our work' is vague and awkward; 'about things related to our work' is clearer. 'how how it gone' is incorrect; it should be 'how it has gone' to use the present perfect tense correctly.

× We chat about our studying, if what we started, what we will start, what we finished, about some widget we sent we sent to each other.

✓ We chat about our studies, what we have started, what we will start, what we have finished, and about some widgets we have sent to each other.

'Studying' should be 'studies' as a noun. 'If what we started' is incorrect; it should be 'what we have started' using present perfect to indicate completed actions relevant to the present. 'What we finished' should be 'what we have finished' for the same reason. 'Widget' should be plural 'widgets' if referring to multiple items. 'We sent we sent' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'we have sent'.

× Umm, I think it's fun to, uh, chat with the group of, uh, people Like I have group with my uh, brothers and my mom.

✓ I think it's fun to chat with a group of people. For example, I have a group with my brothers and my mom.

'Chat with the group of people' should be 'chat with a group of people' to indicate any group. 'I have group with' is missing the article 'a' before 'group'. The sentence is split for clarity.

× Uh, we everyday send a photo of with everyday send photo of our kids and our life, our work videos.

✓ Every day, we send photos of our kids, our life, and videos of our work.

'Everyday' is an adjective meaning common; 'every day' (two words) is the adverb meaning each day. 'Send a photo of with everyday send photo of' is repetitive and ungrammatical. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper preposition use.

× And I think it's a very funny to make a chatting.

✓ And I think it's very fun to chat.

'Very funny' is incorrect here; 'funny' means causing laughter, but the intended meaning is 'fun'. 'Make a chatting' is ungrammatical; 'chat' is the correct verb. The sentence is simplified and corrected.

× Really, I prefer to make communication to any person face to face better than better than social media.

✓ I really prefer to communicate with any person face to face rather than through social media.

'Make communication to any person' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'communicate with any person'. 'Better than better than' is repetitive. 'Face to face' should be followed by 'rather than through social media' for clarity.

× Because face to face, when you look at look to eyes of the person in front of you, it's a very good point to know where his expressions, what he feels, what.

✓ Because face to face, when you look into the eyes of the person in front of you, it's a very good way to understand their expressions and feelings.

'Look at look to eyes' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'look into the eyes'. 'Where his expressions' is incorrect; it should be 'their expressions'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, continuously.

✓ Yes, continuously.

Although 'continuously' is grammatically correct, it is unusual to answer 'Do you argue with friends?' with just 'Yes, continuously.' A better response would be 'Yes, I argue with my friends continuously.' However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes, no change is needed here.

× I argue with argue with my friends, My close friend is I already argue about everything, about our life, what will we do, what will not.

✓ I argue with my friends. My close friend and I already argue about everything, about our life, what we will do, and what we will not.

The sentence has repetition 'argue with argue with' and incorrect structure. 'My close friend is I already argue' is ungrammatical; it should be 'My close friend and I already argue'. The sentence is split for clarity and corrected for grammar.

× Also about some points in our work, about the cases.

✓ Also, about some points in our work and about the cases.

The sentence is a fragment and lacks conjunction to connect ideas. Adding 'and' improves sentence structure.

× I mean dentists, we argue a lot about our cases, what we will do, what we.

✓ I mean, as dentists, we argue a lot about our cases, what we will do, and what we will not.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding 'as dentists' clarifies the subject. The phrase 'what we' is incomplete and should be 'what we will not' to parallel 'what we will do'.