Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and complete by adding a reason or example. Avoid redundancy by not repeating 'I do like'.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts, even though I don't have many friends.

提案: Improve grammar and clarity. Use correct verb forms and be more specific about topics. Avoid vague phrases like 'so many tokens'.

例: I usually chat with my girlfriends about various topics such as studies, money, jobs, and our daily lives.

提案: Try to speak more fluently and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Also, improve sentence structure and use linking words for coherence.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I am not very social, so it helps me improve, and I also enjoy listening to other people's stories.

提案: Your answer is good but can be more concise and fluent. Avoid filler words and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because on social media, conversations often stop when the topic ends, but in person, we can enjoy each other's company even in silence.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many filler words. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct grammar and complete sentences.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions and try to prove our points.

× I have girlfriends so I were chatting about mostly girl things, about everything, about study, about money, about job and so many tokens.

✓ I have girlfriends so I was chatting mostly about girl things, about everything, about study, about money, about job and so many tokens.

The verb 'were' is incorrect here because the subject 'I' requires the past tense singular form 'was'. Using 'were' with 'I' is a past tense issue. The correct past tense form for 'I' is 'was'.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I am umm, I'm not social person, so I would like to improve that and I also love to listen other people's stories.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I am umm, I'm not a social person, so I would like to improve that and I also love to listen to other people's stories.

The phrase 'not social person' is missing the article 'a', which is necessary before singular countable nouns. Also, 'listen other people's stories' is incorrect; the verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and prepositions issue.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because on social media when we are out of topic, we just stop texting.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because on social media when we are off topic, we just stop texting.

The phrase 'out of topic' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'off' in this context. This is an incorrect use of prepositions issue.

× And if we are to face to face, we can just uh, if even if we did not have anything to talk, we can just enjoy each other's company by sitting next to each other.

✓ And if we are face to face, we can just uh, even if we do not have anything to talk about, we can just enjoy each other's company by sitting next to each other.

The phrase 'are to face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'are face to face'. Also, 'did not have anything to talk' is missing the preposition 'about' and the tense should be present 'do not' to match the context. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and tense issue.

× Yes, I argue with my friends, umm, mostly of the time because if I research, uh, did not come along umm, then we fight to each other to prove our.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends, umm, most of the time because if I disagree, uh, do not get along umm, then we fight with each other to prove our point.

The phrase 'mostly of the time' should be 'most of the time' (quantifier issue). 'If I research' is incorrect; likely intended 'if I disagree'. 'Did not come along' should be 'do not get along'. 'Fight to each other' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'with'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly; 'prove our' should be 'prove our point'. These are incorrect use of prepositions and quantifiers issues.