Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，如主谓一致和连接词使用错误。句子应更简洁自然，避免冗余。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. Even though we can't meet often, we stay connected through apps like WeChat, which is very convenient.

提案: 回答内容应更具体，避免模糊表达。使用连词使句子更连贯。

例: We usually talk about daily life, recent news, or work-related issues. With close friends, we can discuss anything openly.

提案: 注意语法错误，如动词形式和冠词使用。句子应更简洁，逻辑更清晰。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it's easier to concentrate and get quick replies. We can focus more on the topic when it's just two of us.

提案: 回答应完整，避免句子未完成。使用更准确的词汇和句式表达观点。

例: I prefer both face-to-face and social media communication. Face-to-face allows immediate interaction, like meeting at a coffee shop, while social media helps us stay connected when we're apart.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。应使用完整句子表达观点，避免句子中断。

例: I used to argue with friends when I was younger, but now we rarely argue because we have matured and understand each other better.

× I think a lot of people likes to do that.

✓ I think a lot of people like to do that.

主语是复数形式的 "people"，谓语动词应使用原形 "like"，而不是第三人称单数形式 "likes"。主谓一致错误。

× Although we can't meet often, but we can communicate and chat through the WeChat or the other communication app, so it's a good way to.

✓ Although we can't meet often, we can communicate and chat through WeChat or other communication apps, so it's a good way.

“Although”和“but”不能同时使用，二者都是转折连词，使用其中一个即可。句中“the WeChat”应去掉定冠词“the”，且“the other communication app”应改为复数形式“other communication apps”。

× Some breaking news about the similarities or the daily life or complain the works or something like that.

✓ Some breaking news about similarities or daily life, or complaints about work, or something like that.

“complain the works”用法错误，应使用名词形式“complaints”，并且“work”不可数，不能加复数“works”。“the similarities”与上下文不符，应去掉定冠词。

× For my close friend, we can talk anything.

✓ With my close friends, we can talk about anything.

“For my close friend”用法不当，应使用介词“with”表示“和……一起”。“talk anything”缺少介词“about”，应为“talk about anything”。

× I feels like it will be more concentrate and I can be replied as soon as possible.

✓ I feel like it will be more concentrated and I can be replied to as soon as possible.

主语“I”应搭配动词原形“feel”，而非“feels”。“more concentrate”应为形容词“concentrated”。“be replied”后应加介词“to”，构成被动语态短语“be replied to”。

× Moreover, we can more focus on the topic that we talked.

✓ Moreover, we can focus more on the topic that we talked about.

“more focus”顺序错误，应为“focus more”。“the topic that we talked”缺少介词“about”，应为“the topic that we talked about”。

× So for me, I think it's better to chat with only one friend.

✓ So for me, I think it's better to chat with only one friend.

该句无语法错误，符合语法规范。

× face to face is really a good way to see each other and talked immediately.

✓ Face to face is really a good way to see each other and talk immediately.

“talked”应为动词原形“talk”，因为前面是并列结构，且时态应保持一致。

× Like we can hang out in the coffee or something like that.

✓ For example, we can hang out in a coffee shop or something like that.

“in the coffee”表达不完整，应为“in a coffee shop”。“Like”用作句首不正式，改为“For example”更合适。

× But.

✓ But (句子不完整，建议补充完整内容或删除)。

“But”作为连词不能单独成句，句子不完整，需补充后续内容或删除。

× When I was young I did, but for now I can say I seldom argue with my friends because we all grow up and we don't really have some issues to complain or argue with, so mostly we will.

✓ When I was young, I did, but now I can say I seldom argue with my friends because we have all grown up and we don't really have issues to complain or argue about, so mostly we don't.

“for now”应改为“now”更自然。“we all grow up”时态错误，应为现在完成时“we have all grown up”。“complain or argue with”后应加介词“about”。“so mostly we will”不完整，改为“so mostly we don't”。