Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn nên tránh nói về việc nói xấu người khác vì điều này không tự nhiên và có thể gây ấn tượng tiêu cực. Hãy cố gắng trả lời một cách tích cực và tự nhiên hơn, đồng thời sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friend. We usually talk about our daily activities and share funny stories. It helps us relax and stay connected.

提案: Bạn nên tránh nói về việc không thích người khác và tập trung vào các chủ đề tích cực hơn. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually chat with my best friends about our schoolwork, teachers, and plans for the weekend. Sometimes, we also talk about our hobbies and favorite games.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và chú ý ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh nói về chủ đề không phù hợp như 'talk about the boys' một cách quá đơn giản.

例: I prefer chatting with a group because it allows us to discuss many different topics. For example, my classmates and I often chat about school events and our interests.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'communicate it face to face'.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it's easier to understand emotions and feelings. Social media can be confusing sometimes, so face-to-face conversations help build better relationships.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là số nhiều và số ít, cũng như cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi như 'a opinion'.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my best friends because we have different opinions on some issues. However, after discussing, we usually understand each other better.

× We always talk about the people that we don't like and laughing at them.

✓ We always talk about the people that we don't like and laugh at them.

After the conjunction 'and', the verb should be in the base form to maintain parallel structure. Using 'laughing' is incorrect here because it breaks the parallelism with 'talk'.

× I think it don't very affect it very much.

✓ I think it doesn't affect it very much.

The modal verb 'do' must agree with the third person singular subject 'it'. Therefore, 'don't' should be corrected to 'doesn't'. Also, 'very' is repeated unnecessarily; one 'very' is sufficient.

× I usually talk about our lives with my best friends, we usually talk about the homework, the teacher and also some friends that we both don't like and like to play with.

✓ I usually talk about our lives with my best friend. We usually talk about the homework, the teacher, and also some friends that we both don't like and like to play with.

The phrase 'my best friends' should be singular 'my best friend' to match the context. Also, the original sentence is a run-on sentence and should be split into two sentences for clarity.

× And we are prefer to talk about our play date too.

✓ And we prefer to talk about our play date too.

The verb 'prefer' does not require the auxiliary verb 'are'. The correct form is simply 'we prefer'.

× I think chat with a group of people can have many topics to chat about.

✓ I think chatting with a group of people can have many topics to chat about.

After 'think', when the verb functions as a noun, the gerund form 'chatting' should be used instead of the base form 'chat'.

× As for example, in my class there are a group of girls in the messenger, so we can talk about the boys and everything's around us.

✓ For example, in my class there is a group of girls in Messenger, so we can talk about the boys and everything around us.

The phrase 'there are a group' is incorrect because 'group' is singular; it should be 'there is a group'. Also, 'everything's' is a contraction for 'everything is' which is incorrect here; it should be 'everything'.

× To be honest, I still prefer to communicate face to face because with the social media it's very hard to know the partners a emotion and feelings.

✓ To be honest, I still prefer to communicate face to face because with social media it's very hard to know the partner's emotions and feelings.

The phrase 'with the social media' is incorrect; 'with social media' is correct. Also, 'partners a emotion' should be 'partner's emotions' to show possession and correct plural form.

× But with the communicate it face to face, it's very easy to do that and have a good relationship.

✓ But communicating face to face, it's very easy to do that and have a good relationship.

The phrase 'with the communicate it face to face' is incorrect. It should be 'communicating face to face' to use the gerund form correctly.

× Yes, I sometimes argue with my best friends because many reason.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my best friend because of many reasons.

'Best friends' should be singular 'best friend' to match the context. Also, 'many reason' should be plural 'many reasons' and 'because' should be followed by 'of' in this context.

× The most common reason of our argument is that me and my friend don't have the same perspective about a problems.

✓ The most common reason for our argument is that my friend and I don't have the same perspective about a problem.

'Reason of' should be 'reason for'. The pronoun order should be 'my friend and I'. 'A problems' is incorrect; it should be 'a problem' (singular).

× So we have argued and in the end of the argument we can have a opinion.

✓ So we have argued, and in the end of the argument, we can have an opinion.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound. Also, commas are added for clarity. The tense 'have argued' is correct here as present perfect.