Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share what happened during the day. It is a convenient way to stay connected and enjoy our time together.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và sắp xếp câu hợp lý hơn để truyền đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng.

例: I usually talk about problems I face during the day, share news, or exchange useful tips with my friends. This helps me learn new things and solve issues.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng và tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như "jesting". Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because in a large group, I often feel uncomfortable and it can be awkward sometimes.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp chưa chính xác, làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

例: Actually, I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to see the other person's facial expressions and emotions, which makes the conversation more meaningful.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, giải thích rõ ràng về việc tranh luận và kết quả của nó.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, these arguments help us understand each other better and find the best solution.

× Uh yes, I like chatting with my friends because this is a convenience connected we can the talking we can share once the day with my friends.

✓ Uh yes, I like chatting with my friends because it is convenient; we can talk and share about our day with my friends.

The original sentence misuses 'convenience connected' which is incorrect adjective usage. The correct adjective is 'convenient' to describe the situation. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× This is make me relax and enjoy.

✓ This makes me relax and enjoy.

The verb 'make' needs to be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'This'. Also, 'make' is a verb here, not an article, but the main issue is subject-verb agreement.

× Uh, I usually check about the problem, the my problem in the day or the share the news or the the tip.

✓ Uh, I usually talk about the problems, my problems during the day, or share news or tips.

The verb 'check about' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'talk about'. Also, 'the my problem' is incorrect; 'my problems' is correct. 'The share the news or the the tip' is ungrammatical and should be 'share news or tips' without articles.

× I, uh, learn in the day with my friend.

✓ I, uh, learn during the day with my friend.

The preposition 'in the day' is incorrect; 'during the day' is the correct phrase. Also, 'friend' should be plural if referring to multiple friends, but context suggests singular is acceptable here.

× I refer jesting with uh, just friend because uh, group very, very uh, a lot of my friends and I don't feel comfortable and it is so weird.

✓ I prefer chatting with just one friend because a group has many of my friends and I don't feel comfortable; it is so weird.

The verb 'refer' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'prefer'. 'Jesting' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting'. 'Just friend' should be 'just one friend'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Actually I refer to communicate face to face because it will help me can the your face and your emotions and I like I like face to face.

✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because it helps me see your face and your emotions, and I like face-to-face communication.

The verb 'refer to communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to communicate'. 'Help me can the your face' is ungrammatical; it should be 'helps me see your face'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective or noun.

× Uh, actually I usually argue with friends because, uh, me and my friend have a really, really idea. Different, different idea.

✓ Uh, actually I usually argue with friends because my friend and I have really different ideas.

The phrase 'me and my friend' should be 'my friend and I' as the subject of the sentence. 'A really, really idea' is incorrect; it should be 'really different ideas' to express plural and adjective usage.

× And the orchid can help me and my friend choose one.

✓ And the argument can help my friend and me choose one.

The word 'orchid' is incorrect in context; it should be 'argument'. Also, 'me and my friend' should be 'my friend and me' as the object of the verb 'help'. The sentence structure is corrected accordingly.