Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且表达了观点，但句子结构稍显重复，且部分表达不够准确。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意语法准确性。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because sharing both happy and frustrating experiences helps me feel supported and relieved.

提案: 回答内容不够清晰，存在语法错误和表达混乱，影响理解。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免模糊和错误表达，并且句子要连贯。

例: Usually, we talk about daily life events, our plans for the future, and sometimes we enjoy sharing interesting gossip.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子较长且结构不够清晰，部分词汇使用不当。建议分句表达，使用更准确的词汇，使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer chatting with one close friend because it allows me to express myself freely and strengthens our relationship.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构复杂且有语法错误，影响流畅度。建议简化句子，注意语法，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps us understand each other's emotions better and reduces misunderstandings that often happen on social media.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但句子重复且语法错误较多。建议避免重复，简化句子结构，注意时态和语法的正确使用。

例: Yes, we sometimes argue, but I believe it strengthens our relationship because it helps us understand and support each other better.

× Absolutely, when I have something happy or annoying that need to share with somebody, friends would be my first choice.

✓ Absolutely, when I have something happy or annoying that needs to be shared with somebody, friends would be my first choice.

这里的主语是'something'，是单数，谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式'needs'，而不是'need'。此外，'share'前应加被动结构'to be'，因为是被分享的内容。

× Most of the time just some little things happen in my life, but I also love to talk about something bigger like the future, the germs in my of me.

✓ Most of the time just some little things happen in my life, but I also love to talk about something bigger like the future, the germs in me.

句中'the germs in my of me'结构不正确，应该是'the germs in me'，去掉多余的'of'。

× And sometimes we also love gossip something.

✓ And sometimes we also love to gossip about something.

动词'gossip'后应接介词'about'，表示谈论某事，且'gossip'作为动词时需要不定式'to gossip'。

× I prefer to chat only one of my close friends, I think they give me enough space to express myself and also they can build a much strong bridge between us in this relationship, so that's why I would be more happy.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one of my close friends. I think they give me enough space to express myself and also they can build a much stronger bridge between us in this relationship, so that's why I would be happier.

'chat only one'缺少介词's with'，应为'chat with only one'。'much strong'应为'much stronger'，比较级形式。'more happy'应为'happier'，形容词的比较级形式。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because in this way you can feel each other's emotion better and it won't cause some misunderstanding which is the social media when chatting in social media would do.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because in this way you can feel each other's emotions better and it won't cause some misunderstandings which social media might cause when chatting.

'emotion'应为复数'emotions'，因为是多种情感。'which is the social media when chatting in social media would do'结构混乱，改为'which social media might cause when chatting'更通顺。

× Of course from time to time, but I don't hate it so much because after an argumentation, I think our relationship getting is deepened because after an argumentation you know each other better and you know how to comfort each other better.

✓ Of course, from time to time, but I don't hate it so much because after an argument, I think our relationship gets deeper because after an argument you know each other better and you know how to comfort each other better.

'argumentation'用词不当，改为'argument'更自然。'our relationship getting is deepened'语序错误，应为'our relationship gets deeper'，使用一般现在时表示状态变化。