Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and clear by limiting to 3-4 sentences. For example, say "I love chatting with my friends because it helps me relax. Whenever I have free time, I send funny messages related to my work."

例: Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it helps me relax. Whenever I have free time, I send funny messages related to my work to keep the conversation light and enjoyable.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific. For example, "I usually chat about my work and studies. Additionally, I share funny videos and ask about my friends' families to keep the conversation personal."

例: I usually chat about my work and studies. Additionally, I share funny videos and ask about my friends' families to keep the conversation personal and engaging.

提案: Try to avoid hesitation and unclear phrases. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, "I prefer chatting one-on-one with my best friends because group chats can be confusing and less personal."

例: I prefer chatting one-on-one with my best friends because group chats can be confusing and less personal, so I feel more comfortable in private conversations.

提案: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to contrast your preferences. For example, "I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see expressions, unlike social media where I can't be sure about people's identity."

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see facial expressions and body language, which social media cannot provide, making interactions more genuine.

提案: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Be clear and specific about reasons and outcomes. For example, "Yes, I sometimes argue with friends about work and studies because we have different opinions. However, we usually resolve conflicts by talking calmly."

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about work and studies because we have different opinions. However, we usually resolve conflicts by talking calmly and understanding each other's views.

× Yes, I love to chatting with friends because I love to gossip with my friends and whenever I was, whenever I'm free and I pick my phone and type something something funny and related to my work with my friends.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with friends because I love to gossip with my friends and whenever I am free, I pick up my phone and type something funny and related to my work with my friends.

The phrase 'love to chatting' is incorrect because after 'love' we use the gerund form of the verb without 'to'. Also, 'whenever I was' is incorrect in present context; it should be 'whenever I am free'. Additionally, 'pick my phone' should be 'pick up my phone' as the phrasal verb 'pick up' is used when taking a phone.

× Uh, usually I chat about with my friends or related to my work, my studies and as well as some fun, share some funny videos with my friends and I'll talk about, uh, how the family members are and how are you doing and something that, something like that.

✓ Uh, usually I chat with my friends about my work, my studies, and also share some funny videos with them. I also talk about how family members are doing and other similar things.

The phrase 'chat about with my friends' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'chat with my friends about'. Also, the sentence was fragmented and unclear, so it was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In my opinion, uh, mostly I love to chat with only one friend at one, uh, on the right time because I love to talk with only my best friends rather than group chat because in Group chat there are more hesitated and I don't even prefer.

✓ In my opinion, I mostly love to chat with only one friend at the right time because I prefer talking with my best friend rather than in a group chat, because in group chats people are more hesitant and I don't prefer them.

The phrase 'my best friends' should be singular 'my best friend' to match 'only one friend'. Also, 'there are more hesitated' is incorrect; 'hesitated' is not used as an adjective here. The correct adjective is 'hesitant'. The sentence was also rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Uh, I love to communicate by face to face rather than social media because on social media I do not, I don't have any idea about my friends and other strange people that they're a girl or a boy, But in a face to face, I'll see and I'll watch how they're talking and communicating with me.

✓ Uh, I love to communicate face to face rather than via social media because on social media I don't have any idea whether my friends or other strangers are girls or boys. But face to face, I can see and observe how they are talking and communicating with me.

The phrase 'communicate by face to face' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'communicate face to face'. Also, 'other strange people that they're a girl or a boy' is incorrect; it should be 'other strangers whether they are girls or boys'. The sentence was rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Definitely. Most of the time I'll argue with my friends, uh, related to my work and studies because most of the times they hesitate and they hesitate me and I'll easily hesitate, but uh, by the, uh, talking and umm.

✓ Definitely. Most of the time I argue with my friends about my work and studies because often they hesitate, and they hesitate me, and I easily hesitate too, but by talking, we resolve it.

The use of 'I'll argue' (future tense) is inappropriate here; present simple 'I argue' fits better for habitual actions. Also, 'most of the times' should be 'often' or 'most of the time'. The sentence was rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.