Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但句子较长且略显冗余，建议简化表达，避免重复，同时注意语法，如“sharing some daily life”应为“sharing daily life experiences”。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because sharing daily experiences is interesting. They also encourage me when I feel down.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且连接词使用不够自然，建议使用更恰当的连接词并分句，使表达更流畅。

例: I usually chat about music with my friends, ranging from Korean pop to classical. We often attend concerts together, which we both enjoy.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如“helps me open my mind”应为“help me open my mind”。建议简化句子并注意主谓一致。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am introverted and value privacy. It helps me relax and open up.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够清晰的问题，如“one on ones communication can make me deeply understand each other”不通顺。建议简化句子，明确表达观点。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more personal. It helps me understand others better than social media.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但“in a very tolerant emotion”表达不自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，如“with tolerance”。

例: I seldom argue with my friends because even if we have different views, we discuss them with tolerance.

× Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends and sharing some daily life with them is quite interesting and whenever I feel depressed they will always encourage me and raise me up.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends and sharing some aspects of daily life with them. It is quite interesting, and whenever I feel depressed, they always encourage me and lift me up.

原句中“sharing some daily life with them”表达不准确，应该用“sharing some aspects of daily life”更合适。此外，句子过长，建议拆分成两个句子以增强表达清晰度。

× I usually chat about music with my friends and it covers a wide range from Korean pop music to classical music, and my friends and I always go to some concerts together and we both enjoy it.

✓ I usually chat about music with my friends, and it covers a wide range from Korean pop music to classical music. My friends and I always go to some concerts together, and we all enjoy them.

原句中“we both enjoy it”中的“both”用于两人，但“my friends and I”指多于两人，应使用“all”，且“concerts”是复数，代词应为“them”。

× I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am actually an introvert person and I just focus on privacy, so I think chatting with only one friend can make me more relaxed and helps me open my mind.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am actually an introverted person and I just focus on privacy, so I think chatting with only one friend can make me more relaxed and help me open my mind.

“introvert”应改为形容词“introverted”修饰“person”。另外，“helps me open my mind”中的“helps”应与前面的“can make”保持一致，改为“help”。

× I prefer communicating face to face because nowadays we all rely on social media and face to face communication becomes more valuable and I think one on ones communication can make me deeply understand each other.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face because nowadays we all rely on social media, and face-to-face communication becomes more valuable. I think one-on-one communication can help me understand others deeply.

“one on ones communication”应为“one-on-one communication”，且“make me deeply understand each other”表达不当，改为“help me understand others deeply”更自然。

× I seldom argue with my friends because even though we have different perspectives, we can discuss it in a very tolerant emotion instead of arguing with each other.

✓ I seldom argue with my friends because even though we have different perspectives, we can discuss them with tolerance instead of arguing with each other.

“in a very tolerant emotion”表达不自然，应改为“with tolerance”。此外，“discuss it”中的“it”应改为复数“them”，因为“different perspectives”是复数。