Museum— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "very great opportunity" and improve grammar by saying "perspectives of different nations." Also, try to use linking words like "because" or "since" to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I think museums are important because they preserve history and culture for future generations. They also offer teenagers a chance to learn about different nations' backgrounds and perspectives, which broadens their understanding of the world.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct quantifiers like "not many museums" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, avoid repetition and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: To be honest, there are not many museums near my hometown because I live in a remote area far from the city center. Therefore, our community lacks historical sites or ancient buildings.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to be more concise and coherent by using linking words and correct verb forms. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your ideas.

例: I don't often visit museums because they don't interest me much. Instead, I prefer adult activities like hanging out with friends at amusement parks or entertainment venues, which I find more enjoyable.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct expressions like "it didn't take too long to get there" and avoid vague phrases like "how the people grew." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I visited a local museum last weekend with my family. It was great because it didn't take long to get there. Moreover, I learned a lot about how civilization developed and how people lived 100 years ago.

× there are not much museum nearby

✓ there are not many museums nearby

The quantifier 'much' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'museum' is a countable noun. Therefore, 'many' should be used instead of 'much'. Also, 'museum' should be plural as it refers to multiple museums.

× there are not much museum nearby

✓ there are not many museums nearby

The noun 'museum' should be plural 'museums' because it refers to more than one museum in this context.

× which far away from the central part of city

✓ which is far away from the central part of the city

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the clause properly. Also, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'city' to specify it.

× there's no more no much historical sites or ancient buildings near our community

✓ there are not many historical sites or ancient buildings near our community

The phrase 'no more no much' is incorrect. The correct quantifier for countable plural nouns like 'historical sites' and 'ancient buildings' is 'not many'. Also, 'there's' (there is) should be 'there are' for plural nouns.

× there's no more no much historical sites or ancient buildings near our community

✓ there are not many historical sites or ancient buildings near our community

The subject refers to multiple 'historical sites or ancient buildings', so the verb should be plural 'are' instead of singular 'is'.

× I don't often visit museum

✓ I don't often visit museums

The noun 'museum' should be plural 'museums' because the sentence refers to visiting museums in general.

× what I tend to do is an adult activities

✓ what I tend to do is adult activities

The article 'an' is incorrect before the plural noun 'activities'. It should be removed.

× for example hang out with my friends to the amusement park or entertainment venues

✓ for example, hang out with my friends at the amusement park or entertainment venues

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate location.

× So basically I like to do things with a group of people and to enjoy and to.

✓ So basically I like to do things with a group of people and to enjoy myself.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a reflexive pronoun 'myself' to complete the phrase 'enjoy myself'.

× it didn't too long to get there

✓ it didn't take too long to get there

The verb phrase 'didn't too long' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'didn't take too long' to express duration in the past.

× I learned quite a lot of things from here

✓ I learned quite a lot of things there

The preposition 'from here' is incorrect when referring to a past visit; 'there' is appropriate to indicate the location visited.

× how the people grew 100 years before

✓ how the people lived 100 years ago

The verb 'grew' is incorrect in this context; 'lived' is more appropriate to describe how people existed in the past. Also, '100 years before' should be '100 years ago' to indicate past time.