Museum— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。主語と動詞の一致や冠詞の使い方に注意し、より明確で自然な表現を心がけましょう。例えば、"Museums are very important because they provide people with new perspectives and help students learn about history."のように言い換えられます。

例: Museums are very important because they provide people with new perspectives and help students learn about history.

提案: 文法的な誤りと不自然な表現があります。"I want to ask the government to build a new museum for study"のように不定詞の使い方と冠詞を正しく使いましょう。また、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると良いです。

例: No, actually there is no museum in my hometown. So I want to ask the government to build a new museum for educational purposes.

提案: 意味が伝わりにくく、文法的な誤りが多いです。"I don't often visit museums because there isn't one near my house, and it takes a long time to get to one. Therefore, I want to ask the government to build a new museum."のように整理して話しましょう。

例: I don't often visit museums because there isn't one near my house, and it takes a long time to get to one. Therefore, I want to ask the government to build a new museum.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りがあり、内容が不明瞭です。"I think the last time I visited a museum was during a school trip to Kyoto when I was a junior high school student. The museum was about Japanese history, and I was excited to learn about it."のように整理して話しましょう。

例: I think the last time I visited a museum was during a school trip to Kyoto when I was a junior high school student. The museum was about Japanese history, and I was excited to learn about it.

× I think very important because museums provides people to get new perspective and it's useful student to obtain a historical subject.

✓ I think museums are very important because they provide people with new perspectives and are useful for students to learn about historical subjects.

The noun 'museums' is plural, so the verb should be 'provide' instead of 'provides' to agree in number. Also, 'perspective' should be plural as 'perspectives' to match the context. The phrase 'it's useful student' is incorrect; it should be 'are useful for students' to correctly use plural and prepositions.

× No, actually there is no museum in my hometown.

✓ No, actually there are no museums in my hometown.

Since 'museum' is countable and the context implies more than one or general absence, the plural form 'museums' should be used with 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× So I want to, I want to ask the government build new museum for study.

✓ So I want to ask the government to build a new museum for study.

The verb 'ask' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'build'. The phrase 'build new museum' lacks the article 'a' before 'new museum'.

× No, I tell them visit the museum because there is no museum in near my house and it's take a long time to go to museum.

✓ No, I tell them to visit the museum because there is no museum near my house and it takes a long time to go to the museum.

The phrase 'tell them visit' requires 'to' before the verb: 'tell them to visit'. 'In near my house' is incorrect; it should be 'near my house' without 'in'. 'It's take' should be 'it takes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'go to museum' needs the article 'the' before 'museum'.

× So I want to ask the government to build a new.

✓ So I want to ask the government to build a new museum.

The sentence is incomplete; 'a new' needs a noun following it, such as 'museum', to complete the meaning.

× I think I visited the museum when I was in junior high school student during trip to Kyoto and this museum was about Japan history history and I was excited to get.

✓ I think I visited the museum when I was a junior high school student during a trip to Kyoto. This museum was about Japanese history, and I was excited to learn.

The phrase 'junior high school student' needs the article 'a'. 'During trip' requires the article 'a' before 'trip'. 'Japan history history' is repetitive and should be 'Japanese history'. The phrase 'excited to get' is incomplete; 'excited to learn' is more appropriate.