Museum— Part 1 採点レポート

× There are a large number of, uh, different exhibitions which, uh, help people understand traditions and learn about the past, and it is the reason why students make a excursion to the museum.

✓ There are a large number of different exhibitions which help people understand traditions and learn about the past, and it is the reason why students make an excursion to the museum.

The word 'excursion' is singular and requires the article 'an' instead of 'a'. Also, the phrase 'make a excursion' is incorrect; it should be 'make an excursion'. This is a singular and plural issue combined with article usage.

× There is only one historical museum which preserve Lithuanian history and shows a little exhibition here.

✓ There is only one historical museum which preserves Lithuanian history and shows a small exhibition here.

The verb 'preserve' should be 'preserves' to agree with the singular subject 'museum'. Also, 'a little exhibition' is better expressed as 'a small exhibition' for clarity. This is a singular and plural issue and adjective usage.

× But uh, I live in a small city, so it is the reason why only one museum there.

✓ But uh, I live in a small city, so that is the reason why there is only one museum.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'there' and the phrase 'it is the reason why only one museum there' is ungrammatical. Correct structure requires 'there is only one museum'. This is a 'There be' issue and sentence structure issue.

× I used to not enter museum and learning history, but now when I'm traveling to another country, I like to explore a new art gallery and new museum for clearly understanding the tradition and their history.

✓ I did not use to visit museums and learn history, but now when I travel to another country, I like to explore new art galleries and museums to clearly understand the traditions and their history.

The phrase 'used to not enter museum and learning history' is incorrect. The correct form is 'did not use to visit museums and learn history'. Also, 'for clearly understanding' should be 'to clearly understand'. This is a past tense issue and verb + -ing form issue.

× It was last spring when I had been in Amsterdam, I decided to go to Art Gallery uh of Bangkok.

✓ It was last spring when I was in Amsterdam that I decided to go to the Art Gallery of Bangkok.

The past perfect 'had been' is unnecessary here; simple past 'was' is correct. Also, the sentence needs a relative clause 'that I decided'. This is a past tense issue and sentence structure issue.

× It was eye opening experience and I like the style of the of his art.

✓ It was an eye-opening experience and I liked the style of his art.

The phrase 'the of his art' is incorrect; it should be 'his art'. Also, 'like' should be past tense 'liked' to match the past event. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and past tense issue.