Museum— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は直接的でわかりやすいですが、意見を述べた後に理由をもう少し具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。また、「not important as the past」は文法的に不自然なので、「not as important as in the past」のように修正してください。

例: I don't think museums are as important as they used to be because nowadays, people can easily access images and information online, which makes visiting museums less necessary.

提案: 答えは明確ですが、「rural area」前に冠詞を入れることや、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。例えば、「because my hometown is in a rural area, it takes about 5 hours to get to a museum.」のように。

例: No, there are no museums in my hometown because it is in a rural area, so it takes about five hours to reach the nearest museum.

提案: 回答は短く、理由も述べていますが、文法的に「museum」は可算名詞なので複数形にし、「which makes me comfortable」よりも「because it makes me feel comfortable」の方が自然です。接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いでしょう。

例: No, I don't often visit museums because the nearest one is far away, and I prefer music since it makes me feel comfortable.

提案: 回答は具体的で良いですが、文をつなげて流れを良くするとさらに良くなります。例えば、「The last time I visited a museum was about 25 years ago when I was a junior high school student. I went there on a school trip, and it was fun.」のように。

例: The last time I visited a museum was about 25 years ago when I was a junior high school student. I went there on a school trip, and it was a fun experience.

× I like music which makes me comfortable.

✓ I like music that makes me comfortable.

In English, 'which' is typically used for non-restrictive clauses, while 'that' is used for restrictive clauses. Here, the clause 'that makes me comfortable' is essential to specify the type of music, so 'that' is more appropriate.