Museum— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer wa eigo no shizen-sa ga tarinai desu. 'museum' wa singular no toki wa 'a museum' to iimasu. 'develop, develop' to iu fukusu no kurikaeshi wa fuyou desu. Motto meikaku ni, rikai shi yasui you ni setsumei shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I think a museum is important because it helps us develop our artistic sense and understand history better.' to iu you ni.

例: I think a museum is important because it helps us develop our artistic sense and understand history better.

提案: Kotae ga fumei de, bunpou mo machigatte imasu. 'so so all city' ya 'there are the car' wa imi ga wakarimasen. Kotae wa chokusetsu shite, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, there are many museums in my hometown, Nara, because it is a city with rich history.' to iu you ni.

例: Yes, there are many museums in my hometown, Nara, because it is a city with rich history.

提案: Eigo no bunpou to hatsuon ni shou ten ga arimasu. 'I owe home visit a museum' wa machigai desu. 'LED' wa 'led' to kakimasu. Kotae wa motto meikaku ni shite, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I often visit museums because my university professor led us there. Sometimes, I go by myself to develop my artistic sense.' to iu you ni.

例: Yes, I often visit museums because my university professor led us there. Sometimes, I go by myself to develop my artistic sense.

提案: Bunpou to imi no meikakusa ga tarinai desu. 'I visit' wa past tense de 'I visited' to shimasu. 'It teach me It taught me a real world and. About and about after the war.' wa imi ga wakarimasen. Motto meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I visited the War Museum in Vietnam two weeks ago. It taught me about the real world and the effects after the war.' to iu you ni.

例: I visited the War Museum in Vietnam two weeks ago. It taught me about the real world and the effects after the war.

× Yes, I think museum is important because it helps us to develop, develop, for example, artistic sense or to understand more about history or something that.

✓ Yes, I think museums are important because they help us to develop, for example, artistic sense or to understand more about history or something like that.

The word 'museum' should be plural 'museums' to match the general statement about museums in general. Also, 'it helps' should be 'they help' to agree with the plural subject 'museums'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Yes, there are many museums in my hometown because my hometown is Nara, so so all city. So there are the car.

✓ Yes, there are many museums in my hometown because my hometown is Nara, which is a small city.

The original sentence contains unclear and incomplete phrases like 'so so all city' and 'So there are the car' which do not make sense. The sentence structure needs correction to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I owe home visit a museum because my professor in university LED us to go there. Or sometimes I want to go there by myself because to develop my sense.

✓ Yes, I often visit a museum because my professor at university led us to go there. Sometimes I also want to go there by myself to develop my sense.

The phrase 'I owe home visit' is incorrect; it should be 'I often visit'. Also, 'LED' should be 'led' (past tense). The modal verb 'want to' is correctly used but the sentence structure is awkward and needs adjustment for clarity.

× I visit at the War Museum in Vietnam two weeks ago. It teach me It taught me a real world and. About and about after the war.

✓ I visited the War Museum in Vietnam two weeks ago. It taught me about the real world and about what happened after the war.

The verb 'visit' should be in past tense 'visited' to match 'two weeks ago'. 'Teach' should be 'taught' as past tense. The sentence is fragmented and needs to be completed for clarity.