Museum— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to give a clear and direct answer first, then support it with specific reasons. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. For example, explain why museums are important and how they attract tourists, using linking words to connect your ideas.

例: Yes, I believe museums are very important because they preserve a country's history and culture. Moreover, they attract tourists, which helps boost the local economy.

提案: Provide a direct answer first and then add specific details about the museum. Avoid excessive hesitation and filler words. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: No, there is only one museum in my hometown. It is a small historical museum, but unfortunately, it is not well developed, so I have never visited it.

提案: Answer directly and clearly, then support with specific details. Use correct grammar and linking words to improve coherence. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, I have lived in Istanbul for seven years and I often visit museums there. In fact, I have visited almost all the museums in the city, which has given me many different perspectives on art and history.

提案: Try to give a clear and complete answer without hesitation. Use past tense correctly and avoid incomplete sentences. Provide specific details about the visit and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: The last time I visited a museum was about two months ago in Istanbul. After meeting my close friend, I went to see a contemporary art exhibition, which I really enjoyed.

× I think, uh, it's very important for uh, countries histories and uh, it's reflect, uh, it's museums and other exhibitions, uh, at get attention from uh, tourists and museums.

✓ I think, uh, it's very important for uh, countries' histories and uh, it reflects, uh, museums and other exhibitions, uh, to get attention from uh, tourists.

The pronoun 'it's' is incorrectly used multiple times where 'it' or 'it reflects' is appropriate. Also, 'countries histories' needs a possessive apostrophe to become 'countries' histories'. The phrase 'at get attention' is incorrect preposition usage; 'to get attention' is correct.

× In my hometown, no, uh, as I know, only one historical museum is there.

✓ In my hometown, no, uh, as I know, there is only one historical museum.

The sentence structure is incorrect for expressing existence. The correct form is 'there is' followed by the noun phrase. 'Only one historical museum is there' is unnatural and incorrect in English.

× Uh, I guess, uh, two months ago I, I visits, uh, my close friends in Istanbul and after she went to do, uh, work, I visits the, uh, contemporary art, uh, exhibition and after the.

✓ Uh, I guess, uh, two months ago I visited, uh, my close friends in Istanbul and after she went to do, uh, work, I visited the, uh, contemporary art, uh, exhibition and after that.

The verb 'visits' is incorrectly used in present tense when referring to a past event. The correct past tense form is 'visited'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and 'after the' should be 'after that' to complete the thought.