Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'in the my school' nên sửa thành 'at my school'. Bạn cũng nên tránh lặp từ và làm câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library at my school every day to study and read books.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng số nhiều cho danh từ đếm được như 'books' thay vì 'book'. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp lại thông tin đã nói trước đó như 'I go to the library every day'. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually read books and study English in the library because it is a quiet place that helps me concentrate.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý nhưng phần giải thích chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu 'I just had time to go to the library' không hợp lý với ý trước đó. Bạn nên giải thích rõ hơn và dùng câu đơn giản, chính xác.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my family didn't have much money and I was very busy with schoolwork.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng. Câu 'the library is very many in Chinese case is popular' không đúng cấu trúc. Bạn nên dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên từ để nối ý.

例: Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because there are many libraries in China and reading is popular among students.

× Yes, I often go to the library in the my school every day.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library in my school every day.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'my school'. When using possessive pronouns like 'my', the definite article 'the' should be omitted.

× I usually read book and study English in the library.

✓ I usually read books and study English in the library.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general, which implies more than one book.

× No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I was poor and I just had time to go to the library.

✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I was poor and I didn't have time to go to the library.

The conjunction 'and' connects two clauses that should both be negative to express the intended meaning. 'I just had time' is incorrect; it should be 'I didn't have time' to match the negative context.

× Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because the library is very many in Chinese case is popular.

✓ Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library because there are many libraries in China and it is popular.

The phrase 'the library is very many' is incorrect. 'Library' should be plural 'libraries' and 'there are' should be used to indicate existence of multiple libraries. Also, 'Chinese case' is unclear and corrected to 'in China' for clarity.