Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat clear but lacks natural flow and has grammatical errors. Try to use simpler, correct sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'there aren't one nearby my house', say 'there isn't one near my house'.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my house. Also, I cannot afford to travel to the city where the library is located. However, when I was in school, I used to visit the school library regularly.

提案: Your answer is fragmented and repetitive. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' properly. Also, avoid repeating the same idea multiple times. Make your answer concise and clear.

例: I usually go to the library to enjoy some peace and quiet because it helps me relax. It is a good place to escape from the noise and busy environment around me.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains incorrect word choices like 'awfully' and 'burdenize'. Try to use simple and correct vocabulary. Also, complete your sentences and explain your ideas clearly.

例: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was a child. Our teachers often took us there to read different kinds of stories so that we could enjoy and learn. They wanted to make learning fun and not stressful.

提案: Your answer has some repetition and awkward phrasing. Use linking words properly and avoid repeating words like 'would be'. Also, try to explain your ideas more clearly and logically.

例: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because China is a developed country. Libraries help children learn and be creative, which leads to new ideas and progress in the country.

× there aren't one nearby my house

✓ there isn't one nearby my house

The phrase 'there aren't one' is incorrect because 'one' is singular, so the verb should be singular 'isn't' instead of plural 'aren't'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I usually went to the library to enjoy some moments of leisure and peace

✓ I usually go to the library to enjoy some moments of leisure and peace

The word 'usually' indicates a habitual action in the present, so the verb should be in the present tense 'go' instead of past tense 'went'. This is a past tense usage error.

× Because I want to. Because sometime I want it.

✓ Because I want to. Because sometimes I want to.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency, and 'want it' is incorrect here; it should be 'want to' to complete the verb phrase. This is an incorrect use of adverbs and verb form.

× Chinese kid often go to the library

✓ Chinese kids often go to the library

The subject 'Chinese kid' is singular but the verb 'go' is plural form. To match the plural verb, the subject should be plural 'kids'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× that's why new ideas emerging in that country

✓ that's why new ideas are emerging in that country

The verb 'emerging' needs an auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense. Without 'are', the sentence is grammatically incorrect. This is an incorrect use of the present participle form.