Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答はやや不自然で、文法的な誤りや冗長な表現があります。例えば、「Maybe a day per week」は「Maybe once a week」や「About once a week」と言い換えた方が自然です。また、「if I want to read some books I want」は繰り返しがあり、簡潔にする必要があります。より明確で自然な表現を心がけましょう。

例: I usually go to the library about once a week. Instead of the city library, I prefer the university library because it has the books I need.

提案: 回答は比較的明確ですが、「has very quiet and beautiful space」という表現は不自然です。「has a very quiet and beautiful study space」など、名詞を明確にしましょう。また、「so I usually use it for finishing my report」も「so I usually use it to finish my reports」と動詞の形を整えると良いです。

例: My university library has a very quiet and beautiful study space, so I usually use it to finish my reports.

提案: 回答が途中で終わっており、文法的にも誤りが多いです。「located never mind elementary school」は意味が不明瞭で、「located near my elementary school」など正しい表現に直す必要があります。また、過去形と現在形が混在しているため、時制を統一しましょう。

例: Yes, I did. The small city library was located near my elementary school, so I often went there when I was a child.

提案: 回答は簡潔ですが、文が途切れていたり、接続詞の使い方が不自然です。「but. I guess」ではなく「but I guess」とつなげましょう。また、理由や具体例を加えるとより良い回答になります。

例: I don't know exactly because I'm not Chinese, but I guess Chinese kids often go to the library like Japanese kids because both cultures value education highly.

× Maybe a day per week.

✓ Maybe one day per week.

The phrase 'a day per week' is grammatically awkward because 'a day' is singular and 'per week' implies a recurring event. Using 'one day per week' clarifies the frequency and is more natural in English.

× And usually I don't go to the city library and so if I want to read some books I want, I go to university library.

✓ And usually I don't go to the city library, so if I want to read some books, I go to the university library.

The phrase 'university library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific library associated with the university. Also, the sentence needed commas for clarity.

× My university library has very quiet and beautiful space for studying, so I usually use it for finishing my report.

✓ My university library has a very quiet and beautiful space for studying, so I usually use it to finish my report.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very quiet and beautiful space'. Also, 'for finishing my report' is better expressed as 'to finish my report' to indicate purpose.

× Yes, I did because the small city library is located never mind elementary school, so I often go I often went to there, but recently I.

✓ Yes, I did because the small city library is located near my elementary school, so I often went there, but recently I...

The phrase 'never mind elementary school' is incorrect; it should be 'near my elementary school' to indicate location. Also, 'go I often went to there' is redundant and incorrect; 'I often went there' is correct.

× I don't know exactly because I'm not Chinese, but. I guess Chinese kids often go to the library like Japanese kids.

✓ I don't know exactly because I'm not Chinese, but I guess Chinese kids often go to the library like Japanese kids.

The sentence is fragmented with an unnecessary period after 'but'. Combining the two parts into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.