Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit repetitive and could be more natural. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your sentences smoothly. Also, use more varied vocabulary to express your reasons.

例: Yes, I often visit the library, particularly during exam periods at university, because it provides a quiet environment that helps me focus and improve my grades.

提案: Your answer is well-structured and relevant, but you can enhance it by adding linking words and more specific details to make it more engaging and coherent.

例: Usually, when I visit the library during exam periods, I concentrate on studying my major subjects because the quiet atmosphere allows me to focus better, which helps me prepare thoroughly and achieve higher exam scores.

提案: Your answer is good but could be improved by using past tense consistently and linking your ideas more smoothly. Also, try to add more specific details about the types of books or your diary writing.

例: Yes, I used to visit the library every other day as a child. I enjoyed reading various books, such as fairy tales and adventure stories, and afterwards, I liked writing my thoughts and experiences in my diary.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your opinion more confidently and use correct sentence structures. Also, avoid vague phrases and provide clearer reasons.

例: Although I'm not Chinese, I believe many Chinese children visit libraries regularly because reading helps them gain knowledge and develop important skills.

× Yes, I usually go to the library especially during my exam periods in my university because I want to achieve better score for my study.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library especially during my exam periods at my university because I want to achieve better scores for my study.

The word 'score' should be plural 'scores' because it refers to multiple exam results, which is a countable noun. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'at' when referring to being enrolled at a university.

× I really enjoyed reading different kinds of books and after that I also like to write in my diary.

✓ I really enjoyed reading different kinds of books and after that I also liked to write in my diary.

The sentence is describing past habits, so the verb 'like' should be in the past tense 'liked' to maintain tense consistency.

× This is because children usually need to read more books than adults to again, lots of knowledge and skills.

✓ This is because children usually need to read more books than adults to gain lots of knowledge and skills.

The word 'again' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'gain' which means to obtain or acquire. This is a sentence structure error affecting meaning.