Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式。

例: I hardly go to the library now, but I used to visit it often when I was a child.

提案: 句子结构不够清晰，存在语法错误，且表达重复。建议简化句子并使用更准确的表达。

例: I usually borrow books that I find interesting.

提案: 时态使用错误，且句子连接不够自然。建议使用过去时态并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I went to the library often when I was a kid because I had much more free time.

提案: 回答较为完整，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更丰富和连贯。

例: As far as I know, Chinese kids hardly ever go to the library because they have too much homework, so they prefer to study at home.

× Hardly ever for now, but when I was a child I often go to the library.

✓ Hardly ever for now, but when I was a child I often went to the library.

这里描述过去的习惯动作，应该使用一般过去时，动词go需改为went。

× I usually borrow some books which I think I find it interesting.

✓ I usually borrow some books which I think are interesting.

句中使用了多余的find it结构，且形容词interesting应直接修饰books，需用are interesting。

× Yes, when I was a kid. I have much more free time so I always go to the library.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid. I had much more free time so I always went to the library.

描述过去的情况，动词have和go应使用过去时had和went。

× As far as I know, Chinese kids hardly ever go to the library because they have too much homework to do.

✓ As far as I know, Chinese kids hardly ever go to the library because they have too much homework to do.

该句语法正确，无需修改。