Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, có cấu trúc rõ ràng. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung lý do cụ thể, sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I don't often go to the library because I prefer using e-books. They are very convenient and provide a lot of information quickly. Also, the library near my home is quite old and not very comfortable.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó dùng từ nối để bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động của bạn trong thư viện.

例: I usually go to the library with my friends to share useful books. Besides, I read books to improve my knowledge and help with my studies.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì động từ. Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Hãy dùng từ nối để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: No, I didn't go to the library much as a child because I spent most of my time playing traditional games like hide and seek with my friends.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ nối để làm rõ ý. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời thuyết phục.

例: Yes, Chinese children often go to the library because education is highly valued. They use the library to gain knowledge and access useful information for their studies.

× I think so be I think no, because nowadays there are many e-book that I can learn online and I have more information about and get some information of the world and the ebook is very convenient.

✓ I think so, but I think no, because nowadays there are many e-books that I can learn from online and I have more information about the world, and the e-books are very convenient.

The sentence has incorrect use of 'be' and singular/plural forms. 'E-book' should be plural 'e-books' because it refers to many. Also, 'there are many e-book' is incorrect; it should be 'there are many e-books'. The phrase 'I can learn online' needs 'from' to be correct. The sentence structure is confusing and needs punctuation for clarity.

× I think so be I think no, because nowadays there are many e-book that I can learn online and I have more information about and get some information of the world and the ebook is very convenient.

✓ I think so, but I think no, because nowadays there are many e-books that I can learn from online and I have more information about the world, and the e-books are very convenient.

The word 'e-book' should be plural 'e-books' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'the ebook is very convenient' should be 'the e-books are very convenient' to agree in number.

× and the boss here are very old.

✓ and the books here are very old.

The word 'boss' is likely a typo for 'books'. 'Books' is plural and correctly paired with 'are'. This correction fixes the typo and maintains subject-verb agreement.

× I often go to the library with my friends and they we can share some books that are very useful for my study and life and it's AI also read some book that I have for my knowledge, for my improvement of knowledge.

✓ I often go to the library with my friends and we can share some books that are very useful for my study and life, and I also read some books that I have for my knowledge, for my improvement of knowledge.

The phrase 'they we' is incorrect; it should be 'we'. 'It's AI' is unclear and likely a mistake; it should be 'I also'. 'Some book' should be plural 'some books' to match the context.

× No, because when I were a child I used to play hide and seek and some traditional play traditional game with my friends and I didn't often go to the library when I was younger.

✓ No, because when I was a child I used to play hide and seek and some traditional games with my friends and I didn't often go to the library when I was younger.

The verb 'were' should be 'was' to agree with the singular subject 'I'. 'Play traditional game' should be 'play traditional games' to be plural and grammatically correct.

× No, because when I were a child I used to play hide and seek and some traditional play traditional game with my friends and I didn't often go to the library when I was younger.

✓ No, because when I was a child I used to play hide and seek and some traditional games with my friends and I didn't often go to the library when I was younger.

The phrase 'play traditional game' is incorrect; it should be 'play traditional games' to indicate multiple games.

× I think this because in the China has a very, the knowledge is very important for every kids and every children, and they often go to the library to impose their knowledge and some information about.

✓ I think this is because in China, knowledge is very important for every kid and every child, and they often go to the library to improve their knowledge and get some information.

The phrase 'in the China' is incorrect; it should be 'in China' without 'the'. 'Every kids and every children' is incorrect; 'every' should be followed by singular nouns: 'every kid and every child'. 'Impose their knowledge' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'improve'. The sentence is also missing some words for clarity.