Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về lý do bạn đến thư viện và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it offers a lot of information that I am eager to learn. I usually visit to read books and expand my knowledge.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng số nhiều cho danh từ và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm một vài chi tiết để câu trả lời phong phú hơn và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

例: In the library, I usually read books and study various subjects to improve my knowledge.

提案: Bạn cần sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn lý do bạn không đến thư viện khi còn nhỏ.

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because my parents were very busy and couldn't take me there.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai từ 'kind' thành 'kid'. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể trả lời một cách lịch sự và mở rộng câu trả lời hơn.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in my experience, many Vietnamese children often visit the library to study and read books.

× Yes I do, because the library have many knowledge I don't know before.

✓ Yes I do, because the library has much knowledge I didn't know before.

The subject 'library' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'knowledge' is an uncountable noun, so 'much' is used instead of 'many'. The phrase 'I don't know before' is incorrect in tense and should be 'I didn't know before' to match past context.

× So I often go to the library to improve my my.

✓ So I often go to the library to improve my knowledge.

The phrase 'my my' is incomplete and unclear. It seems the student intended to say 'my knowledge'. The sentence needs a complete object to make sense.

× In the library I read book and and improve my knowledge.

✓ In the library I read books and improve my knowledge.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading multiple books generally. Also, the repeated 'and' is a typographical error and should be corrected.

× No I didn't because when I was a child my parent is so busy and cannot to.

✓ No I didn't because when I was a child my parents were so busy and could not go.

The plural noun 'parents' requires the plural verb 'were'. 'Cannot to' is incorrect; 'could not go' is the correct past tense modal verb usage. The sentence needs a verb after 'could not' to complete the meaning.

× I don't know because I'm a Vietnamese kind.

✓ I don't know because I'm a Vietnamese kid.

The word 'kind' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'kid' to refer to a child. This is a vocabulary error related to pronoun usage.