Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki penggunaan tense dan tata bahasa agar jawaban lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

例: Yes, I often visited the library when I was in college because I needed to find new books for my studies. I also felt comfortable studying there.

提案: Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan tata bahasa, serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Gunakan kosakata yang tepat dan hindari pengulangan kata.

例: Sometimes I go to the library with my friends, but other times I prefer to study alone. The environment is comfortable and clean, which helps me focus better on my studies.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar jawaban lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan hindari pengulangan kata.

例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child because I preferred playing around my house. Also, I thought the library was for people who already knew how to read well.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa, struktur kalimat, dan kosakata agar jawaban lebih jelas dan efektif. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

例: I think Chinese children often go to the library because reading is encouraged from a young age. Moreover, the government provides free access to library facilities to support this habit.

× Yes, I frequently visit the library when I was in college.

✓ Yes, I frequently visited the library when I was in college.

The sentence mixes present tense 'visit' with past time reference 'when I was in college'. The verb should be in past tense 'visited' to match the past time frame. (Indonesian: Kalimat ini mencampur waktu sekarang 'visit' dengan referensi waktu lampau 'when I was in college'. Kata kerja harus dalam bentuk lampau 'visited' agar sesuai dengan waktu lampau.)

× I am searching for a new books for my study and I feel comfortable when I study in library.

✓ I am searching for new books for my study and I feel comfortable when I study in the library.

'A new books' is incorrect because 'books' is plural and 'a' is singular. Also, 'in library' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the place. (Indonesian: 'A new books' salah karena 'books' jamak dan 'a' tunggal. Juga, 'in library' perlu artikel tertentu 'the' untuk menunjukkan tempat.)

× Sometimes I go to library with my friends or just do it alone.

✓ Sometimes I go to the library with my friends or just do it alone.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. (Indonesian: Kata benda 'library' membutuhkan artikel tertentu 'the' saat merujuk pada tempat tertentu.)

× I feel the environment and library is comfort, clean and and makes me more focused on my studying there.

✓ I feel the environment and library are comfortable, clean, and make me more focused on my studying there.

'Comfort' is a noun; the adjective 'comfortable' should be used. Also, 'library is' should be 'library are' because of compound subject. 'And and' is a typo. 'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject. (Indonesian: 'Comfort' adalah kata benda; harus menggunakan kata sifat 'comfortable'. 'Library is' harus 'library are' karena subjek majemuk. 'And and' adalah kesalahan ketik. 'Makes' harus 'make' agar sesuai dengan subjek jamak.)

× No, because when I was child I prefer to play surround my house around my house.

✓ No, because when I was a child I preferred to play around my house.

Missing article 'a' before 'child'. 'Prefer' should be past tense 'preferred' to match 'when I was a child'. 'Surround my house around my house' is redundant and incorrect; 'play around my house' is correct. (Indonesian: Artikel 'a' hilang sebelum 'child'. 'Prefer' harus bentuk lampau 'preferred' agar sesuai dengan 'when I was a child'. 'Surround my house around my house' berlebihan dan salah; 'play around my house' benar.)

× Because library is for people who already have skills to read.

✓ Because the library is for people who already have reading skills.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'library'. 'Skills to read' is better expressed as 'reading skills' for natural phrasing. (Indonesian: Artikel tertentu 'the' hilang sebelum 'library'. 'Skills to read' lebih baik diungkapkan sebagai 'reading skills' agar lebih alami.)

× I think so because in Chinese people have awareness to read since they was a child and I the the government.

✓ I think so because Chinese people have awareness to read since they were children and the government

'In Chinese people' is incorrect; should be 'Chinese people'. 'They was' should be 'they were' for plural subject. 'I the the government' is incomplete and incorrect. (Indonesian: 'In Chinese people' salah; harus 'Chinese people'. 'They was' harus 'they were' untuk subjek jamak. 'I the the government' tidak lengkap dan salah.)

× Give them the facility to free it in the library.

✓ gives them the facilities to use for free in the library.

Sentence fragment missing subject; 'Give' should be 'gives' to agree with 'the government'. 'Facility' should be plural 'facilities'. 'To free it' is incorrect; better 'to use for free'. (Indonesian: Fragmen kalimat tanpa subjek; 'Give' harus 'gives' agar sesuai dengan 'the government'. 'Facility' harus jamak 'facilities'. 'To free it' salah; lebih baik 'to use for free'.)