Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda qarışıqlıq var və cümlələr çox uzun və təkrarlayıcıdır. Daha qısa və aydın ifadələr istifadə edin və fikrinizi daha səlis ifadə etmək üçün sadə cümlələr qurun.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because I am busy with university and work. Instead, I prefer buying books and reading them at home.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və qarışıqlıq var. Daha dəqiq və qısa cümlələr qurun, əlavə olaraq əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin ki, cavabınız daha məntiqli olsun.

例: When I go to the library, I usually pick a book to read. It can be a storybook or a textbook I need for university.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qarışıqlıq və natamam ifadələr var. Cavabınızı daha strukturlaşdırılmış və aydın edin, əlavə olaraq dəqiq nümunələr verin.

例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child. Instead, I often visited bookstores and bought many storybooks in English and Azerbaijani.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və məntiqi əlaqənin olmaması var. Cavabınızı daha aydın və məntiqli etmək üçün sadə və düzgün cümlələr qurun, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

例: In my opinion, yes, Chinese children often go to the library. Education in China is more demanding than in Azerbaijan, so they start learning earlier than we do.

× Actually, no, frequently because I don't have so much time to go to the library because I have a university and I also work, so I just like buying any book and reading at home.

✓ Actually, no, I don't go frequently because I don't have much time to go to the library because I attend university and I also work, so I just like buying books and reading at home.

The original sentence lacks the modal verb 'do' for negation and frequency expression. 'I don't go frequently' is the correct form to express frequency in negative sentences. Also, 'have a university' is incorrect; it should be 'attend university'. 'So much time' is better as 'much time' in negative sentences. 'Buying any book' is awkward; 'buying books' is more natural.

× When I go to the library, normally I just take a book and start to reading this book.

✓ When I go to the library, normally I just take a book and start reading this book.

After the verb 'start', the gerund form (verb + -ing) should be used without 'to'. Therefore, 'start reading' is correct, not 'start to reading'.

× This book is maybe is this book can be a story book or maybe just the book which I need from the for the university.

✓ This book may be a storybook or maybe just a book that I need for university.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words causing confusion. 'Maybe is this book' is incorrect; 'may be' is the correct modal verb phrase. 'From the for the university' is incorrect; it should be 'for university'. Also, 'storybook' is one word.

× Actually, not when I was a kid, I didn't go to the library, but I went to the story, I went to the book shops and I bought a lot of story books for in English, maybe in Azerbaijani.

✓ Actually, no, when I was a kid, I didn't go to the library, but I went to storybook shops and bought a lot of storybooks in English and maybe in Azerbaijani.

The phrase 'I went to the story' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'storybook shops'. 'Story books' is better as 'storybooks'. 'For in English' is incorrect; it should be 'in English'. The sentence is also restructured for clarity.

× In my opinion, yes, science gets off into the library.

✓ In my opinion, yes, Chinese kids often go to the library.

The original sentence 'science gets off into the library' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is that Chinese kids often go to the library. 'Gets off' is not appropriate here.

× I think that in China education is more challenging than in than Azerbaijan.

✓ I think that education in China is more challenging than in Azerbaijan.

The phrase 'in China education' is awkward; 'education in China' is correct. Also, 'than in than Azerbaijan' has a repeated 'than' which is incorrect.

× So I think that they are learn everything early from us than us.

✓ So I think that they learn everything earlier than we do.

The phrase 'they are learn' is incorrect; it should be 'they learn'. 'Early' should be 'earlier' for comparison. 'From us than us' is incorrect; the correct comparative structure is 'earlier than we do'.