Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho câu trả lời không tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading. It offers a quiet atmosphere and a wide variety of books, which helps me learn new things.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng nên chú ý đến việc sử dụng số nhiều cho danh từ (books) và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually read books and study in the library because it provides a quiet and comfortable environment. Moreover, it has many specialized books that I need, so I really enjoy spending time there.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp (thì và số nhiều), và câu hơi dài, thiếu sự liên kết mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và chia động từ phù hợp, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu rõ ràng hơn.

例: No, there was no library in my district when I was a child. However, my parents encouraged me to read by building a small library at home, which motivated me to read more.

提案: Câu trả lời không trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Vietnam, many children often go to the library because we have a strong reading culture and enjoy spending time with books.

× reading books helps me approach to the new knowledge in new aspects

✓ reading books helps me approach new knowledge from new aspects

The verb 'approach' is not followed by the preposition 'to' in this context. Instead, 'approach' is directly followed by the object. Also, 'from' is more appropriate to indicate perspectives or aspects. Suggestion: remove 'to' and use 'from' before 'new aspects'.

× in the library have lots of books

✓ in the library there are lots of books

The sentence lacks the subject 'there' and the verb 'are' to correctly form the existential sentence. The correct structure is 'there are' to indicate existence of plural nouns. Suggestion: add 'there are' before 'lots of books'.

× so and they have a good atmosphere to read books so I.

✓ and they have a good atmosphere to read books.

The sentence is fragmented and contains redundant conjunctions 'so and' and an incomplete ending 'so I.' Suggestion: remove 'so and' and the incomplete phrase to make a complete sentence.

× I usually read book and study in library

✓ I usually read books and study in the library

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general. Also, 'library' should have the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. Suggestion: use 'books' and 'the library'.

× study in library because the library has a quiet and comfortable environment

✓ study in the library because the library has a quiet and comfortable environment

The phrase 'study in library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library' to specify the place. Suggestion: add 'the' before 'library'.

× they have lots of specialized books I need

✓ they have lots of specialized books I need

This sentence is correct in terms of singular/plural usage.

× I really like to enjoy the moments when I read book and study in library

✓ I really like to enjoy the moments when I read books and study in the library

'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general. Also, 'library' should have the definite article 'the' to specify the place. Suggestion: use 'books' and 'the library'.

× when I were a child my district don't have a library

✓ when I was a child my district didn't have a library

The subject 'I' requires the past tense 'was' instead of 'were'. Also, 'don't have' should be in past tense 'didn't have' to match the time frame. Suggestion: use 'was' and 'didn't have'.

× my parents encourage me reading more books

✓ my parents encourage me to read more books

The verb 'encourage' is followed by the object plus the infinitive form 'to read', not the gerund 'reading'. Suggestion: use 'encourage me to read'.

× so they build a small library in my house

✓ so they built a small library in my house

The verb 'build' should be in past tense 'built' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: use past tense 'built'.

× I really like reading book in my small library

✓ I really like reading books in my small library

'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to reading in general. Suggestion: use 'books'.

× I don't know because I'm Vietnamese person

✓ I don't know because I'm a Vietnamese person

The noun 'person' requires an article 'a' before it. Suggestion: add 'a' before 'Vietnamese person'.

× but I know Vietnamese is often go to the library

✓ but I know Vietnamese often go to the library

The phrase 'Vietnamese is often go' is incorrect. 'Vietnamese' as plural people should be followed by plural verb 'go'. Also, 'is' is unnecessary. Suggestion: remove 'is' and use 'Vietnamese often go'.

× because in Vietnam we have this strong culture of reading books and we really enjoy the moments when we're reading books

✓ because in Vietnam we have a strong culture of reading books and we really enjoy the moments when we're reading books

The determiner 'this' is less appropriate here; 'a' is better to indicate one of many cultures. Suggestion: use 'a strong culture'.