Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和单复数形式。

例: Yes, I usually go to the library twice a week because it is very quiet, which helps me concentrate on my homework.

提案: 回答中有语法错误且表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并明确说明活动内容。

例: I usually do my homework and sometimes attend lessons in the library.

提案: 句子结构混乱，时态使用不当，建议理清句子逻辑，正确使用过去时态。

例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my parents were very busy, so I usually stayed at home.

提案: 回答过于简单，缺乏细节和连接词，建议丰富内容并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library because it is a good place for studying and reading books.

× Yes, I usually go to the library twice a week because I think libraries is very quiet so I can so I can do my homework very good.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library twice a week because I think libraries are very quiet so I can do my homework very well.

libraries是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are，而不是is。

× Yes, I usually go to the library twice a week because I think libraries is very quiet so I can so I can do my homework very good.

✓ Yes, I usually go to the library twice a week because I think libraries are very quiet so I can do my homework very well.

good是形容词，修饰动词时应使用副词well。

× I usually do my homework we day and have a lesson in the library.

✓ I usually do my homework every day and have a lesson in the library.

we day应为every day，且句子缺少连词and连接两个动作。

× No I didn't because my parents lost many free time so when I am when I was a kid I usually stay home.

✓ No, I didn't because my parents had little free time, so when I was a kid I usually stayed home.

lost many free time表达不正确，应使用had little free time；stay应使用过去时stayed以保持时态一致。

× No I didn't because my parents lost many free time so when I am when I was a kid I usually stay home.

✓ No, I didn't because my parents had little free time, so when I was a kid I usually stayed home.

句中出现了时态混乱，when I was a kid后应使用过去时态stayed，而不是现在时stay。

× Yes, in the library there are many Chinese kids.

✓ Yes, there are many Chinese kids in the library.

英语中there be句型中，there通常放在句首，位置错误导致句子不自然。