Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use correct grammar. For example, explain your past and current library usage clearly and concisely.

例: I used to go to the library frequently last year to prepare for university entrance exams. However, now I rarely visit because I have a small library at home.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence and add specific details using linking words. Also, use correct verb tenses and prepositions.

例: When I go to the library, I usually read books and search for information that I need for my studies.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Respond directly with a clear topic sentence, use past tense correctly, and add supporting details with linking words.

例: I didn't visit the library often as a child because I didn't know what it was for. However, when I started first grade, my teacher introduced me to the library, and then I began to go regularly.

提案: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Provide a clear opinion with specific reasons and avoid redundancy. Use appropriate vocabulary and linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I believe Chinese children often visit libraries because they are encouraged to develop good reading habits in a supportive environment.

× Yes, I went to library last year because I prepared to enter the university.

✓ Yes, I went to the library last year because I was preparing to enter the university.

The sentence requires the past continuous tense 'was preparing' to indicate an ongoing action in the past. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× Now I don't visit often often in case I have a little library in my home.

✓ Now I don't visit often because I have a small library at my home.

The phrase 'in case' is incorrectly used; 'because' is appropriate to express reason. Also, 'a little library' should be 'a small library' to describe size, and 'in my home' should be 'at my home' to indicate location.

× When I went to library, I read the books and try to find information which I need to me.

✓ When I went to the library, I read books and tried to find information that I needed.

'To library' should be 'to the library' with the definite article. 'The books' is better as 'books' in general. 'Try' should be past tense 'tried' to match 'went'. 'Which I need to me' is incorrect; it should be 'that I needed' to correctly link the clause and use past tense.

× Probably I didn't visit because I don't know about the library and what do did there.

✓ Probably I didn't visit because I didn't know about the library and what to do there.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Don't know' should be 'didn't know' to match past context. 'What do did there' is incorrect; it should be 'what to do there' to express purpose.

× But when I went to first class my teacher show library, then I started to go to library.

✓ But when I went to first grade, my teacher showed me the library, then I started to go to the library.

'First class' is better expressed as 'first grade' in this context. 'Show' should be past tense 'showed'. 'Show library' is incomplete; it should be 'showed me the library'. Also, 'to library' needs the definite article 'to the library'.

× Yes, I think Chinese kids frequently go to library because they adopt this environment and I believe reading book books of Chinese kids habit.

✓ Yes, I think Chinese kids frequently go to the library because they adapt to this environment, and I believe reading books is a habit of Chinese kids.

'Go to library' needs the definite article 'the library'. 'Adopt this environment' is incorrect; it should be 'adapt to this environment'. 'Reading book books of Chinese kids habit' is ungrammatical; it should be 'reading books is a habit of Chinese kids'.