Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say "Yes, I often go to the library. Last year, I went frequently to prepare for university, and now I visit sometimes when I have free time."

例: Yes, I often go to the library. Last year, I visited frequently to prepare for university entrance exams. Now, I go occasionally when I have free time to study or read.

提案: Your answer is vague and repetitive. Try to be more specific and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, "When I go to the library, I usually read books and search for information I need for my studies."

例: When I go to the library, I usually read books and search for information I need for my studies. Sometimes, I also use the computer to do research.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct answer with supporting details. For example, "I did not often go to the library as a child because I preferred playing with my friends. However, when I started school, I began visiting the library more often."

例: I did not often go to the library as a child because I preferred playing with my friends. However, when I started first grade, I began visiting the library regularly to borrow books for school.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Try to organize your ideas logically and use appropriate vocabulary. For example, "I think many Chinese children often go to the library because they are eager to learn. Also, as China develops rapidly, education is becoming more important."

例: I think many Chinese children often go to the library because they are eager to learn new things. Moreover, with China's rapid development, education has become a high priority for families.

× I went to Often library last year because I prepared to enter university then.

✓ I went to the library often last year because I was preparing to enter university then.

The original sentence misplaces the adverb 'often' and omits the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'prepared' should be in the past continuous 'was preparing' to indicate an ongoing action in the past. Correct placement of adverbs and articles improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Now sometimes I go if I have a free time.

✓ Now sometimes I go if I have free time.

The phrase 'a free time' is incorrect because 'time' is an uncountable noun here and should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Removing 'a' makes the phrase grammatically correct.

× If I go to library, I usually read the book and get and find the information which I need and so.

✓ If I go to the library, I usually read books and find the information I need.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' to specify the place. 'The book' should be plural 'books' to indicate general reading. The phrase 'get and find' is redundant; 'find' suffices. Also, 'which I need and so' is awkward and unnecessary; simplifying improves clarity.

× I I probably not because when I was such a child, a child, I wanted to play a play with my friend and but when I went to first first class, I went to.

✓ I probably did not because when I was a child, I wanted to play with my friends, but when I went to first grade, I went to the library.

The original sentence has multiple issues: missing auxiliary verb 'did' for negation in past tense, redundant phrases, incorrect article usage, and incomplete sentence ending. Correcting these improves grammatical correctness and clarity.

× I think so because there is their children's want to learn anything and you know it's Chinese, Chinese, China is a very improve developed fastly and then another fastly, fastly and I think the whole Chinese child.

✓ I think so because there are children who want to learn, and you know, China is developing very fast, and I think all Chinese children...

The phrase 'there is their children's want' is incorrect; it should be 'there are children who want'. 'Improve developed fastly' is incorrect; 'developing very fast' is correct. 'Fastly' is not a proper adverb; 'fast' is used instead. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammar and clarity as much as possible.