Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use more natural and grammatically correct expressions. Instead of 'I will go', use 'I go' or 'I sometimes go'. Also, say 'to look for interesting books' rather than 'to search some interesting book'. Keep your answer concise and clear.

例: Yes, I sometimes go to the library to look for interesting books.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid confusing phrases like 'go to Seoul' unless you mean the city. Use linking words to connect ideas, and be specific about your activities in the library. For example, say 'I usually check for new books, and I also study there when preparing for tests.'

例: I usually check if there are new books available, and I also study in the library when I need to prepare for tests.

提案: Use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Also, improve sentence structure and clarity. For example, say 'Yes, I used to go to the library with my classmates on weekends. After finishing our homework, we would read interesting books there.'

例: Yes, I used to go to the library with my classmates on weekends. After finishing our homework, we would read interesting books there.

提案: Avoid vague or unclear answers. Instead, give a thoughtful opinion or say you are unsure politely. Also, use correct expressions like 'they study hard' rather than 'they're hard to study'.

例: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids study hard and might often go to the library to help with their studies.

× Yes, sometimes I will go to the library to search some interesting book.

✓ Yes, sometimes I go to the library to search for some interesting books.

The use of 'will' is incorrect here because the sentence describes a habitual action, so the simple present tense 'go' is appropriate. Also, 'search' should be followed by 'for' when looking for something, and 'book' should be plural 'books' to match 'some'.

× Yes, sometimes I will go to the library to search some interesting book.

✓ Yes, sometimes I go to the library to search for some interesting books.

The verb 'search' requires the preposition 'for' when indicating what is being looked for. Omitting 'for' is incorrect in this context.

× Yes, sometimes I will go to the library to search some interesting book.

✓ Yes, sometimes I go to the library to search for some interesting books.

The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because 'some' indicates more than one item.

× I usually go to Seoul if they have some new books and sometimes if I need to prepare a test I will go to library too.

✓ I usually go to the library if they have some new books, and sometimes if I need to prepare for a test, I will go to the library too.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'go to Seoul' instead of 'go to the library'. Also, 'prepare a test' should be 'prepare for a test'. The sentence needs commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× I usually go to Seoul if they have some new books and sometimes if I need to prepare a test I will go to library too.

✓ I usually go to the library if they have some new books, and sometimes if I need to prepare for a test, I will go to the library too.

'Prepare' requires the preposition 'for' when referring to getting ready for something like a test.

× I usually go to Seoul if they have some new books and sometimes if I need to prepare a test I will go to library too.

✓ I usually go to the library if they have some new books, and sometimes if I need to prepare for a test, I will go to the library too.

'Library' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× Yes, I will go to the library.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the library.

The use of 'will' is incorrect when talking about past habitual actions. 'Used to' is appropriate to describe past habits.

× When I was a kid I usually with my classmates to go to their study in the weekend and after homework we will watching some interesting book there.

✓ When I was a kid, I usually went with my classmates to their study group on the weekend, and after homework, we would watch some interesting books there.

The sentence is missing the verb 'went' after 'I usually'. 'Their study' is unclear; 'study group' is more appropriate. 'On the weekend' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'Will watching' is incorrect; 'would watch' fits past habitual actions. Also, 'books' should be plural.

× When I was a kid I usually with my classmates to go to their study in the weekend and after homework we will watching some interesting book there.

✓ When I was a kid, I usually went with my classmates to their study group on the weekend, and after homework, we would watch some interesting books there.

The verbs should be in the past tense to match the time frame 'when I was a kid'. 'Usually went' and 'would watch' correctly express past habitual actions.

× When I was a kid I usually with my classmates to go to their study in the weekend and after homework we will watching some interesting book there.

✓ When I was a kid, I usually went with my classmates to their study group on the weekend, and after homework, we would watch some interesting books there.

'With my classmates' requires the preposition 'with' before 'my classmates'. 'On the weekend' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× After homework we will watching some interesting book there.

✓ After homework, we would watch some interesting books there.

'Will watching' is incorrect; the correct form is 'would watch' to indicate past habitual action.

× After homework we will watching some interesting book there.

✓ After homework, we would watch some interesting books there.

'Book' should be plural 'books' because 'some' indicates more than one item.

× I don't know, I'm not a Chinese kid, but maybe because they're hard to study.

✓ I don't know, I'm not a Chinese kid, but maybe it's because they study hard.

'They're hard to study' is incorrect; it should be 'they study hard' to express that they put effort into studying. Also, 'it's because' is needed to introduce the reason properly.