Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，语法错误较多，建议使用完整句子并明确表达去图书馆的目的。

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading books there.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，介词使用不当，建议使用正确的介词并丰富细节。

例: I usually do my homework and read books in the library because it is quiet and comfortable.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，语法和表达错误较多，建议用完整句子清晰表达过去的经历。

例: Yes, I went to the library whenever I wanted. I remember reading many books, especially haikus.

提案: 回答不完整且不自然，缺乏具体信息，建议用完整句子并提供具体描述。

例: Yes, many Chinese kids often go to the library to study and read books.

× Yes, I often go, but I go there read books.

✓ Yes, I often go, but I go there to read books.

这里缺少不定式to，动词go后面接动词时应使用不定式形式。建议在read前加to，构成不定式to read。

× I usually do my homework and read my book on there.

✓ I usually do my homework and read my book there.

介词on在这里使用不当，表示地点时直接用there即可，不需要on。建议去掉on。

× Yes, I went to library when I choose.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I chose.

名词library前缺少定冠词the，表示特指图书馆。建议加上the。

× Yes, I went to library when I choose.

✓ Yes, I went to the library when I chose.

句中choose应为过去式chose，与前面的went保持时态一致。建议将choose改为chose。

× Haiku remind me many books.

✓ Haiku reminds me of many books.

主语Haiku为单数，谓语动词应加s变为reminds；动词remind后应接介词of；many books前缺少介词of。建议改为reminds me of many books。

× Yes, it's so many. Many.

✓ Yes, there are so many.

句子缺少主语和谓语，it’s so many结构不完整，表达数量时应使用there are。建议改为There are so many。