Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid filler words like 'so yeah' and 'like'. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific reasons using linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet and comfortable place to read. Additionally, the library near my home has a great selection of books, which makes it my preferred spot for reading in my free time.

提案: Avoid hesitation and filler words such as 'uh' and 'like'. Provide a clear and structured answer with linking words to explain your activities in the library more specifically.

例: When I go to the library, I first browse the shelves to find a book that interests me. Then, I usually find a quiet spot to sit and read for a while.

提案: Try to avoid repeating phrases and filler words. Start with a clear statement and support it with specific details and linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because I have always loved reading. Sometimes, I went with my friends, but other times I enjoyed going alone to explore new books.

提案: Focus on answering the question directly and avoid irrelevant comparisons. Use clear linking words and specific examples to support your opinion.

例: I believe that many Chinese kids do go to the library because it provides a quiet and peaceful environment for reading. However, it ultimately depends on each child's personal interest in books.

× I'd really love to do reading in my free time.

✓ I'd really love to do reading in my free time.

The phrase 'do reading' is not idiomatic in English. The correct expression is 'read' or 'do some reading'. However, since 'do reading' is not listed as a grammar problem type in the provided list, no correction is made.

× That's why I really prefer to go to library.

✓ That's why I really prefer to go to the library.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific library. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect.

× I just, uh, look around the environment and the book particular that on, on that day I want to read.

✓ I just, uh, look around the environment and the particular book that on that day I want to read.

The phrase 'the book particular that on' is awkward and incorrect. The adjective 'particular' should precede the noun 'book' as 'the particular book'. Also, the preposition 'on' before 'that day' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× I see like many people's really love to do reading in their free times and they often go to the libraries because it's a quiet and peaceful.

✓ I see like many people really love to do reading in their free time and they often go to the libraries because it's quiet and peaceful.

The phrase 'many people's' is incorrect; it should be 'many people' without the possessive. Also, 'free times' should be 'free time' as 'time' is uncountable here. The phrase 'it's a quiet and peaceful' is incomplete; 'a' should be removed because 'quiet and peaceful' are adjectives describing the place generally.