Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar, for example, say "I don't often go to the library because nowadays people can find any information they want online." Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

例: No, I don't often go to the library because nowadays people can find any information they want online, which makes libraries less necessary.

提案: Your answer has some repetition and awkward sentence structure. Try to organise your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, and use linking words. For example, "I usually do my homework or tasks on my laptop in the library because I prefer reading books at home."

例: I usually do my homework or tasks on my laptop in the library because I prefer reading books at home rather than in the library.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical mistakes. Use past tense consistently and improve sentence flow. For example, "When I was a kid, I lived in the outskirts of a city where there were no big libraries. The only library was at my school, so I used to go there."

例: When I was a kid, I lived in the outskirts of a city where there were no big libraries. The only library was at my school, so I used to go there.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words. For example, "No, most parents of Chinese children prefer to buy new books rather than visit libraries because new books are more convenient than old ones."

例: No, most parents of Chinese children prefer to buy new books rather than visit libraries because new books are more convenient than old ones.

× I notice every people can read anything that you want just by searching it online.

✓ I notice every person can read anything that they want just by searching it online.

The word 'people' is plural, but 'every' requires a singular noun, so 'every people' is incorrect. It should be 'every person'. Also, 'you' should be changed to 'they' to maintain consistency with the singular subject.

× So I think people are not longer need libraries.

✓ So I think people no longer need libraries.

The phrase 'are not longer need' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'no longer need' to express that people do not need libraries anymore.

× The things that usually I usually do in the library is doing my homework or tasks with my laptop.

✓ The things that I usually do in the library are doing my homework or tasks with my laptop.

The sentence has redundancy with 'usually' repeated and subject-verb agreement error: 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs reordering for clarity.

× I did not read in the library.

✓ I do not read in the library.

The question is about usual activities, so present tense is appropriate. 'Did not read' is past tense and does not fit the context.

× I prefer books read.

✓ I prefer reading books.

The phrase 'books read' is incorrect. The verb 'prefer' should be followed by a gerund ('reading') or a noun phrase. 'Reading books' is the correct form.

× When I was a kid, I live in outskirts of a city, so in the place where I live we didn't have any big libraries.

✓ When I was a kid, I lived in the outskirts of a city, so in the place where I lived we didn't have any big libraries.

The sentence refers to past events, so the verbs should be in past tense: 'live' should be 'lived'.

× I live in outskirts of a city,

✓ I lived in the outskirts of a city,

The phrase 'outskirts of a city' requires the definite article 'the' before 'outskirts'.

× most of parents of Chinese kids prefer buy books, not go to libraries.

✓ most parents of Chinese kids prefer to buy books, not to go to libraries.

After 'prefer', the verb should be in the infinitive form with 'to'. Also, 'most of parents' is incorrect; it should be 'most parents'.

× most of parents of Chinese kids prefer buy books, not go to libraries.

✓ most parents of Chinese kids prefer to buy books, not to go to libraries.

'Most of parents' is incorrect because 'parents' is a plural noun and 'most' can be used without 'of' in this context.

× It's often because new print books are more much more convenient than the old books that in the libraries.

✓ It's often because new print books are much more convenient than the old books in the libraries.

The phrase 'more much more' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is 'much more'. Also, 'that in the libraries' is awkward; 'in the libraries' suffices.