Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. "in library" yerine "to the library" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı yapmak için bağlaçları daha etkili kullanabilirsiniz. Cümlenizi 3-4 cümle ile sınırlı tutmaya çalışın.

例: I don't often go to the library in summer because I don't have exams. However, in winter, I visit the library frequently to study since it helps me concentrate better than at home.

提案: Cevabınız samimi ancak fazla tekrar ve dolgu kelimeler içeriyor. Daha doğal ve etkili olmak için gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalı ve cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net kurmalısınız. Bağlaçları kullanarak cümleler arasında akıcılık sağlayabilirsiniz.

例: I usually go to the library with my friends. We study there, but we also spend time together in the cafeteria, chatting briefly before continuing our work.

提案: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve gereksiz tekrarlar var. "go to library" yerine "go to the library" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net kurarak daha etkili olabilirsiniz.

例: No, I didn't go to the library as a child. I only started going last year because my exams have become more difficult, so now it's necessary for me to study there.

提案: Cevabınızda belirsizlik ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "every kid go" yerine "every kid goes" demelisiniz. Ayrıca, daha kesin ve özgüvenli cevaplar vermeye çalışın. Gereksiz dolgu kelimelerden kaçının.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids specifically, but I believe that children in every country visit libraries because they need quiet places to study.

× In the summer I don't go to library very often because I do not have exams, but in winter I do have exams so I go in library pretty often and study there because it helps me concentrate more in library than I do it in my house.

✓ In the summer I don't go to the library very often because I do not have exams, but in winter I do have exams so I go to the library pretty often and study there because it helps me concentrate more in the library than I do at my house.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'to' when indicating going to a place, and 'in my house' should be 'at my house' to correctly express location.

× I go in library pretty often and study there because it helps me concentrate more in library than I do it in my house.

✓ I go to the library pretty often and study there because it helps me concentrate more in the library than I do at my house.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when expressing movement towards a place; 'to' should be used instead. Also, 'in my house' should be 'at my house' to correctly indicate location.

× ...because it helps me concentrate more in library than I do it in my house.

✓ ...because it helps me concentrate more in the library than I do at my house.

The phrase 'in library' needs the definite article 'the' and the preposition 'in' is correct here. However, 'in my house' should be 'at my house' to properly indicate location.

× And usually I go to library with my friends.

✓ And usually I go to the library with my friends.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× And so in library we also like spend time together and go to the cafeteria of the library and spend time there and, and just do a quick chit chat.

✓ And so in the library we also like to spend time together and go to the cafeteria of the library and spend time there and just have a quick chit chat.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'like spend' should be 'like to spend' to correctly use the verb after 'like'. 'Do a quick chit chat' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have a quick chit chat'.

× And so in library we also like spend time together and go to the cafeteria of the library and spend time there and, and just do a quick chit chat.

✓ And so in the library we also like to spend time together and go to the cafeteria of the library and spend time there and just have a quick chit chat.

After the verb 'like', the infinitive form 'to spend' is required. Also, 'do a quick chit chat' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'have a quick chit chat'.

× But I also study of course.

✓ But I also study, of course.

A comma is needed before 'of course' to separate the phrase properly; no preposition error here but punctuation improves clarity.

× Uh, this library thing is a new thing to me. Uh, I started going to library last year and since my exams start to get a lot harder, so it is an obligation to go to library for me right now.

✓ Uh, this library thing is a new thing to me. Uh, I started going to the library last year and since my exams started to get a lot harder, it is an obligation to go to the library for me right now.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'since my exams start to get' should be 'since my exams started to get' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Uh, I started going to library last year and since my exams start to get a lot harder, so it is an obligation to go to library for me right now.

✓ Uh, I started going to the library last year and since my exams started to get a lot harder, it is an obligation to go to the library for me right now.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× I guess every kid go to library in every country because at some point all of us need to study and need a quiet place for that.

✓ I guess every kid goes to the library in every country because at some point all of us need to study and need a quiet place for that.

The subject 'every kid' is singular and requires the verb 'goes' (third person singular). Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'.