Library— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer wa shizen de, shōsai mo arimasu ga, 'the book of mathematics and the history' no hyōgen ga fukuzatsu de, 'mathematics and history books' to shōjiki ni setsumei shita hō ga yoi desu. Mata, 5-bun no bunshō ni ososugiru node, motto kantan ni shite kudasai.

例: Yes, I often go to the library because I love reading, especially mathematics and history books.

提案: Kotae wa nagaku, fukuzatsu na bunshō desu. 'the mathematics physics book' ya 'poetry from the history' no hyōgen ga fukuzatsu de, motto wakariyasui hyōgen o tsukatte kudasai. Mata, setsuzoku-shi o tsukatte, riron-teki ni setsumei shite kudasai.

例: When I go to the library, I usually bring a pen and paper. I study mathematics and physics books and try to solve problems. Also, I enjoy reading historical poetry.

提案: Kotae ni wa bunpō no machigai ga arimasu. 'didn't went' wa 'didn't go' ni shite kudasai. Mata, setsuzoku-shi o tsukatte, kotae o motto shizen ni shite kudasai.

例: When I was a kid, I mostly didn't go to the library because it was far from my home. However, I used to visit once or twice a month on weekends.

提案: Kotae wa shizen desu ga, 'plenty of library' wa 'plenty of libraries' ni shite kudasai. Mata, motto shōsai na jōhō o tsukatte kotae o fukameru to yoi desu.

例: I think there are many libraries in Chinese cities, but I am not sure because I am not from China.

× I love reading books, especially the book of mathematics and the history.

✓ I love reading books, especially books on mathematics and history.

'The book of mathematics' and 'the history' are incorrect because 'mathematics' and 'history' are general subjects and do not require the definite article 'the'. Also, 'book of mathematics' should be plural or rephrased to 'books on mathematics' to match the context of reading multiple books.

× When I go to library I study the mathematics physics book and try to solve the problem enlisted in the books.

✓ When I go to the library, I study mathematics and physics books and try to solve the problems listed in the books.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'the mathematics physics book' is awkward; it should be plural 'mathematics and physics books' to indicate multiple books. 'Problem enlisted' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'problems listed'.

× Also I try to read some poetry from the history.

✓ Also, I try to read some poetry from history.

'From the history' is incorrect because 'history' as a subject does not need the definite article 'the' here.

× When I was a kid I mostly didn't went to the library because library was far from my home.

✓ When I was a kid, I mostly didn't go to the library because the library was far from my home.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'went' should be 'go'. Also, 'library was far' needs the definite article 'the' before 'library'.

× But during the weekends I used to go to library once or twice a month.

✓ But during the weekends, I used to go to the library once or twice a month.

'Go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'.

× I think in China there are plenty of library in all the municipalities, but I have no idea because I am not from China.

✓ I think in China there are plenty of libraries in all the municipalities, but I have no idea because I am not from China.

'Plenty of library' is incorrect because 'library' should be pluralized to 'libraries' when referring to many.