Library— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you often go to the library?
受験者
Yes, I often go to library. Is it a place where I can study and focus on my homework?
試験官
What do you usually do in the library?
受験者
In the library, I usually do my homework and read book because it's a quiet place where I can concentrate on my studies.
試験官
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
受験者
No I didn't because I don't have many money and I'm very young to alone go to library.
試験官
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
受験者
I don't know. That's because I'm Vietnamese.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you often go to the library?
スコア: 60.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi và tránh hỏi lại giám khảo. Bạn nên nói rõ tần suất và mục đích đến thư viện một cách tự nhiên và ngắn gọn.
例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can focus on my studies.
What do you usually do in the library?
スコア: 85.0提案: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
例: In the library, I usually do my homework and read books because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate well on my studies.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
スコア: 50.0提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và giải thích rõ ràng lý do không đi thư viện khi còn nhỏ.
例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I was too young to go there alone and my family didn't have much money.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
スコア: 40.0提案: Bạn nên cố gắng trả lời câu hỏi hoặc đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân thay vì từ chối trả lời. Bạn có thể nói về quan điểm hoặc kinh nghiệm của mình liên quan đến việc trẻ em đến thư viện.
例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in my experience, many Vietnamese kids often go to the library to study and read books.
文法
× Yes, I often go to library.
✓ Yes, I often go to the library.
The noun 'library' is a specific place here, so it requires the definite article 'the'. Omitting 'the' before singular, countable, specific nouns is incorrect.
× In the library, I usually do my homework and read book because it's a quiet place where I can concentrate on my studies.
✓ In the library, I usually do my homework and read books because it's a quiet place where I can concentrate on my studies.
The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to more than one book in general. Using singular 'book' here is incorrect.
× No I didn't because I don't have many money and I'm very young to alone go to library.
✓ No, I didn't because I didn't have much money and I was too young to go to the library alone.
The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'Don't have' should be past tense 'didn't have' to match 'didn't'. 'Many money' is incorrect; 'much money' is used with uncountable nouns. 'I'm very young' should be past tense 'I was too young'. 'To alone go' is incorrect word order; it should be 'to go alone'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the'.
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